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Post by **aTOMiC** » Fri Sep 19, 2003 9:18 am

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Post by **CovenantJr** » Sat Sep 20, 2003 10:23 am

I'm gonna have to do what i did with "The Creed" - print it all off and read it at leisure. Ditto Lord Simian's works...

Post by **Skyweir** » Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:57 am

excellent read .. really well written .. clearfrontier!! i was expecting it to be a spoof .. and it was actually an interesting, credible and actual episode script.

a few questions .. did the old guy feel worthy of this mother? or did he feel unworthy of her?

I am very interested to see who this guy actually is and just how he got into Paris' shuttle .. the delta flyer?

I really like .. "THE Paris" .. reminded me of the prophetic relationship .. THE Sisco had with the bajorans (sp?) lol

i'll be back .. I am just going to look at the next chapters ..

Post by **aTOMiC** » Mon Sep 22, 2003 12:49 am

Thanks Very much Sky. Without revealing too much about the entire story, the old man apparently was searching for Paris and was concerned he would not discover him at the proper time. Upon finding him the old man had fulllfilled something important to "The Mother". The Mother in this case would not be the old man's biological mother but rather a symbolic mother figure in the vein of an "Earthmother".

Post by **Skyweir** » Mon Sep 22, 2003 3:21 am

ahhh cool!! i figured she was a representation of something greater .. thats really cool .. now i must work out what in the devil it all is ..

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