Tuvor: First Mark of the Bloodguard
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Tuvor: First Mark of the Bloodguard
Last edited by marineguy on Tue Oct 05, 2010 4:32 am, edited 1 time in total.
You judge too quickly giant
The general appearance is good..
Great facial features and the garb is good.
But there is too much muscle mass,
He look more of a power lifter than a martial arts guy.
Bruce Lee had muscles, but his were tuned to hard hitting, blinding speed strikes. Along the line of acrobatics muscle tone.
Great facial features and the garb is good.
But there is too much muscle mass,
He look more of a power lifter than a martial arts guy.
Bruce Lee had muscles, but his were tuned to hard hitting, blinding speed strikes. Along the line of acrobatics muscle tone.
What's this silver looking ring doing on my finger?
I wouldn't shrink the bulk down quite as far as Bruce Lee/typical Martial Artist, however, yea, those are some pretty insanely large upper body muscles (though, I think the legs aren't bad as is).
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I've highlighted what I think are the important parts.In [u]Lord Foul's Bane[/u] was wrote:They were like Stonedownors in size and build, but they were flat-faced and brown-skinned, with curly hair cropped short. They wore short ocher tunics belted in blue that appeared to be made of vellum, and their lower legs and feet were bare. Simply standing casual and unarmed on the abutment, they bore themselves with an almost feline balance and alertness; they seemed ready to do battle at an instant's notice.
I think it argues that the Haruchai are stocky (as Stonedowners are), short, and well muscled, rather than Bruce-Lee-like. However, I also agree with Sindatur about being overdone. That much bulk is generally contrary to moving quickly and having feline balance. (Yes, I know ... not always.)
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Nicely done MarineGuy
I Never Fail To Be Astounded By The Things We Do For Promises - Ronnie James Dio (All The Fools Sailed Away)
Remember, everytime you drag someone through the mud, you're down in the mud with them
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain
Where are we going...and... WHY are we in a handbasket?
Remember, everytime you drag someone through the mud, you're down in the mud with them
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...
It's about learning to dance in the rain
Where are we going...and... WHY are we in a handbasket?