Posting a story of mine--?

[Worm of Despite]

If I may, I'd like to post a slice of a work I've been developing in my mind for over a year. The story itself I have not committed down to writing till last week, though. Some things are like that for me. Plus, I was sixteen or so when I first formulated it, and I had very little confidence in my skills. But, anyway, the reason I ask permission is because the prologue in and of itself is bloody long. I mainly need some opinions on what I post, to see if what I'm writing is, at all, interesting. I think I'm writing it correctly--that's not the problem. Keep in mind, though, this is the prologue, after all. It's a small introduction and a small glimpse--nothing more, nothing less. The real story IS literally novel-length in its arc, but the payoff is huge. The story covers many years and lives, as well as two distinctly different worlds.

[Earthblood]

I'd read it - not up to me to ok it, but I for one would be interested

[Vain]

I think it would be great. I have no idea if there is a word limit here but I have something else brewing that you might want to help me test

[Lord Mhoram]

Vain and his bag o' tricks!

[Worm of Despite]

*scratches head, still very numb from taking in all that was The Two Towers*

Preciousss...

*wipes drool from chin*

I mean--! Is your okay the okay I think I'm looking for, Vain? Or is there someone else in authority I should ask, hm?!

[Vain]

Vain and his bag o' tricks!

*LOL* I have heaps of them

Lord Foul - You don't need permission to post your work. Post it and if the Fan-fic forum gets going, we can move it there. For now, I think it would be great to read it.