drew wrote:Could you pick just one?
Cho and Khat;the same person.
They both are so sweet
Awww
They both are so sweet;
thoughtful kindness and caring
found here on the watch.
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
(umm... the last five syllables here are "-py to be here now"... not sure how to proceed ... BTW, a haiku has lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables ... okay, it's just a game ... I'll go with ...)
Sorry wayfriend- I was just shooting for 17 syllables. Haiku's can be written in different ways. From haikuworld.com
Ten tips for writing haiku
Write in three lines of about 10 to 17 syllables (some writers use a short-long-short format, but sometimes it’s better to just say what you need to say and not worry about form); haiku are usually not 17 syllables long in English.
That said:
Trolls need not apply
said the princess to the beast
gnomes run the show here
The journey of a thousand miles begins with a broken fan belt and a leaky tire.
A worthy poem
touches the heart and the mind
I cannot write well
"We probably could have saved ourselves, but we were too damned lazy to try very hard... and too damn cheap." - Kurt Vonnegut
"Now if you remember all great paintings have an element of tragedy to them. Uh, for instance if you remember from last week, the unicorn was stuck on the aircraft carrier and couldn't get off. That was very sad. " - Kids in the Hall
I cannot write well
on these walls all spackled-worn
my message must survive
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
may live in your heart
may not survive in your world
love is a mixture
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
Cate wrote:love is a mixture?
then mix me one
make mine sweet
I need to add a few syllables to make the first line 5... (haiku = 5-7-5)
Make my love sweet please
a little sugar - spice - thyme
Valentines Day gift
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
But I was not there
when you searched for a good friend
look for me today
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
Trust Love, Truth, and Life
to keep your strong soul content
You're welcome & true
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
silence the answer
in your brave mind & strong heart
The weak cannot know
[spoiler]"...the loveliness of the Land has only grown more precious to me as my senses have been
opened...To turn homeward now would be to pass from treasure-berries to dust."
-- Liand to Linden [P324 Runes][/spoiler]
