UGHHHH
So sorry, I don't know what I did wrong, but I tried, there you go. Be honest as you like if you care to read and respond.

<pre> “THE GAP, PILOT” By Benjamin Doremus ############# Rochester, NY 14625 315-576-#### bzldoremus@gmail.com FADE IN: EXT. UMCP TRAINING GROUNDS - DAY Quiet. Stillness. GENERAL TARVO stands at a podium under the bright sun as a crowd of people sit in metallic bleachers behind him. His face is sinc...

<pre> “THE GAP, PILOT” By Benjamin Doremus ############# Rochester, NY 14625 315-576-#### bzldoremus@gmail.com FADE IN: EXT. UMCP TRAINING GROUNDS - DAY Quiet. Stillness. GENERAL TARVO stands at a podium under the bright sun as a crowd of people sit in metallic bleachers behind him. His face is sinc...

Thanks guys. I feel sheepish. I was able to find some of those exact pages just today during an internet search. I lent out my copy of the first book and it had been a while. To be honest, I'm fairly surprised to have received 2 reactions so quickly. Not to bash on the site, but, among the people I ...

Most assuredly, she had to have crossed the gap and then have gone under heavy g when in training, right? Had it just not happened yet? I'm confused. She was out on her first mission during the beginning of the novel, correct? I ask because I'm writing a pilot episode. I want to make it happen, and ...

I was joining the site and trying to figure out how to do so when I saw a quick link to the latest in film production news. I have since lost it and NEED to read it. So please help me out?

:D Hi, I am basically on this chat forum or whatever you refer to it as (I mean no disrespect but my technological vocabulary is not where it should be) because I would like TO CONGRATULATE Mr. DONALDSON on his latest success. I loved every word and would like to extend a personal thank you and I ca...