Kevin's Watch

Vain wrote:I think males should be Thomas's and Females should be Lindens

Cameraman Jenn wrote:What? No Sandgorgons? You are breaking my heart Jay....how about Waynhim for girls and Sandgorgons for boys...come on.....Pleeeeeaaase? Pretty please with sugar and whipped cream and some more begging on top?

Creator wrote:

Cameraman Jenn wrote:What? No Sandgorgons? You are breaking my heart Jay....how about Waynhim for girls and Sandgorgons for boys...come on.....Pleeeeeaaase? Pretty please with sugar and whipped cream and some more begging on top?

How can you resist Jay? Nothing like a woman begging!! I say, give her what she wants!

Vain wrote:I was sold at "whipped cream"

Vain wrote:I was sold at "whipped cream"

Cameraman Jenn wrote:As she glanced across the table and took in the immense vista of the room she had been unwillingly confined to by the masters, she realized her immedicable desire to see the Sandgorgons reflected in the inchoate display of the land's artisans. All the land's peoples had been cast in a chiaroscuro of glory by the artisans of the land's past: excepting the Sandgorgons. "Why?" she asked, as tears of inconsolable remorse welled in her eyes? "Why had the Sandgorgons been irrevocably left out of the land's past? Had they been bereft of the honor of killing Samadhai Sheol? How could the giants have forgotten such largesse or the sacrifice of Grimmand Honniscrave?" Trembling, as if she were on the verge of deflagration she uttered the name she had been hoarding to herself irregardless of the possible implications, "Jay" and with the utterance she found herself newly empowered, able to cast off the trepidations of her past and invoked again, "Jay, Help me to envision the Sandgorgons, I can't do this without you." She stood, overlooking the emotions that ran turbulent in her soul and steeling herself against further opposition, spoke the final invocation, "Jay, bring me the Sandgorgons."
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Creator wrote:

Cameraman Jenn wrote:As she glanced across the table and took in the immense vista of the room she had been unwillingly confined to by the masters, she realized her immedicable desire to see the Sandgorgons reflected in the inchoate display of the land's artisans. All the land's peoples had been cast in a chiaroscuro of glory by the artisans of the land's past: excepting the Sandgorgons. "Why?" she asked, as tears of inconsolable remorse welled in her eyes? "Why had the Sandgorgons been irrevocably left out of the land's past? Had they been bereft of the honor of killing Samadhai Sheol? How could the giants have forgotten such largesse or the sacrifice of Grimmand Honniscrave?" Trembling, as if she were on the verge of deflagration she uttered the name she had been hoarding to herself irregardless of the possible implications, "Jay" and with the utterance she found herself newly empowered, able to cast off the trepidations of her past and invoked again, "Jay, Help me to envision the Sandgorgons, I can't do this without you." She stood, overlooking the emotions that ran turbulent in her soul and steeling herself against further opposition, spoke the final invocation, "Jay, bring me the Sandgorgons."
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i would agree, Creator...with the tiny exception of this word that's NOT A WORD.

the word is REGARDLESS. without regard. IRregardless IS A REDUNDANCY and not a word. i tell you this Jenn as i am trying to stop the dissemination of the thing. and because you're too good a writer not to know this. and because i like you and don't want you to look stupid.

BTW, Wonderful Donalson'ian writing!!

Cameraman Jenn wrote:irregardless

adv : regardless; a combination of irrespective and regardless sometimes used humorously

I was trying to be funny.....sheesh

Cameraman Jenn wrote:I was trying to be really over the top more Donaldson'y than Donaldson himself.....and I promise I will never ever ever use that word again, even in humor.....Please don't hurt me Lucimay.....

Avatar wrote:I didn't know Alynna was a member of THOOLAH.

--A

Cameraman Jenn wrote:Really? BEER BEER BEER........

hrmm....must take a long time to run from Md to Ca....