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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 5:06 am
by Dread Poet Jethro
These are the birth pangs
While they are called "contractions"
They are not shortened!

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 2:43 pm
by deer of the dawn
They are not shortened
Time itself will have its time
Reward after pain.

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 5:48 pm
by Dread Poet Jethro
Reward after pain
Reinforce masochism
What a warped concept

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:36 pm
by Zenlunatic
What a warped concept
Playing this Haiku game is
Complete waste of time

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:56 pm
by ussusimiel
Complete waste of time.
All illusion anyway.
Poetic justice.

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 12:25 am
by Dread Poet Jethro
Poetic justice
Dealt from the point of my quill
Will write what is wrong

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:09 am
by ussusimiel
Will write what is wrong.
Wil rong wat iz rite. Is this
Pr'saic injustice?

Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 9:59 am
by deer of the dawn
Pr'saic injustice?
Is anything prosaic
about suffering?

Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 10:42 am
by Shaun das Schaf
about suffering?
winter in the dead of heart
blossoms resilience

Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:27 pm
by ussusimiel
Blooms resilience.
Endurance brightly flowers.
Purple crocuses.

[EDIT 1: to change second line, but Zenlunatic was in so quickly it became an edit.]
[EDIT 2: meant to say that I adjusted Shaun's last line to fix the syllable count. These things don't bother me overmuch but they drive some people to distraction :crazy: so it's best to be gentle with their sensibilities.]

Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:30 pm
by Zenlunatic
Purple crocuses
What the hell is going on
I don't like flowers

Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 6:50 am
by Shaun das Schaf
I don't like flowers
Trampled into muddy earth
Go light, bare of foot

Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:53 am
by deer of the dawn
Go light, bare of foot
and open of eye, ear, heart
tread lightly the earth

Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:37 pm
by Shaun das Schaf
Tread lightly the earth
Listen now, life’s orchestra
The open-eared dance

Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 2:22 pm
by ussusimiel
The open-eared dance.
The Zen of one Lunatic
drowns in hippy honey.

The open-eared dance.
The Zen of one Lunatic
hippy honey drowns.

[EDIT: to fix syllable count :oops: ]

Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:16 pm
by Zenlunatic
drowns in hippy honey
oh my that unfettered fruit
assails my taste buds

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2011 8:56 pm
by deer of the dawn
assails my taste buds
baked squash with honey butter
sound pretty good now

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2011 9:19 pm
by Linna Heartbooger
Sound pretty good now:
("resilliance"- four or three)
Peace, ussusimiel.

[Edit: For irony, I'm not certain how many syllables "ussusmiel" is. :lol: In the case of three syllables, my haiku should replace "Peace" with "Blush not".]

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2011 11:24 pm
by ussusimiel
ussusimiel
never checked proper pron. in
the Obscure Words Thread.

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 6:16 am
by Savor Dam
The obscure words thread
Themselves on my tongue, building
Vocabulary