Kevin's Watch

Skyweir wrote:Okie Diddley dokie .. count me in also .. Ill go dust em off .. so let me get this straight .. so weve started .. we just read and each do a critique of a chapter And Im three chapters behind

K so will have to catch up stat

That's right, Sky! Technically, we've already started, and you can post your reactions to the first two chapters already, as their threads have been in Ancillary Documentation since 2012.

StevieG, Skyweir, Avatar, Effaeldm, Savor Dam, and anyone else interested: Let me know when you've decided what chapter or chapters you wish to dissect! I'll then update the above chapter list, send it to lucimay, and see if she'll need my help with sending people reminders. No doubt we'll have to have time extensions here and there, but we can still make progress!

The third FK chapter dissection has been posted (just click on the title below):

The Gap Into Vision: Forbidden Knowledge 3 - Chapter2

You can assign me a chapter .. no particular preference

Cord Hurn wrote:I'm certainly willing to do several chapter dissections. If we really can find enough people who want to do this, then we can contact lucimay about it. I propose that we can use the already-posted dissections by Effaeldm and Lord Foul (actually the same person) as a launching point. What do my fellow Gap fans think of that idea?

I have PM'd lucimay about this project, and have let her know that I'm willing to do all I can to see it through!

Skyweir wrote:You can assign me a chapter .. no particular preference

Sure thing, Skyweir, and thank you! Would you like to do the next (fourth) chapter dissection, entitled, "Chapter 3"?

No worries Cordy When do you need it by

So I write it up and pm it via KW pm

As an alternative to PMing, why not just post it to the forum as a new thread? See the prior dissection threads for a thread-naming model.

Yeah, you write it, you post it.

Let's see what the take-up is, I can probably do a couple chapters here and there depending on demand...

--A

Skyweir wrote:No worries Cordy When do you need it by

So I write it up and pm it via KW pm

You can just post it to the Ancillary Documentation subforum as a brand new thread, Skyweir, just like Savor Dam says! And thank you so much for volunteering! Would the 1st of June work for you as a date to have it up, or do you need more time?

Nope thats brilliant ...

And likewise Ive got capacity.. so can take on more when you need it

I asked because it seemed you had a formality in process .. you wrote yours sent it to someone .. seemed like maybe an overseer and then you posted it .. following clearances

Hey Im relatively here ... relatively speaking .. for all I know you have an editor in chief secreted somewhere here

And Im familiar with lines of authority

I volunteer to take on the next five chapters, two of them Ancillary Documentations. Those AD chapters are usually short, so I don't see a need to really give them two weeks before a new chapter dissection thread is posted. They may turn out to be fun to do!

Lord Foul wrote:Also, I call dibs on the second Angus chapter.

Fangthane is getting a PM from me about this, to see if that desire still stands. If so, I will render responsibility of its dissection to the Render! Fitting, yes?

So posted Chapter 3 last night

Thank you, Skyweir! I have just posted the follow-up chapter ("Ancillary Documentation/Datacores").

Yay

Also, the dissection for the sixth chapter of FK, being the fourth chapter of Morn's story in FK, "Chapter 4", is now posted.

Yep read your critique.. nicely done

Posted today: Forbidden Knowledge 7 - Chapter 5

Skyweir wrote:Yep read your critique.. nicely done

Thank you so very much, Skyweir! I'm working on the dissections for FK 8 ("Chapter 6"), and FK 9 (Ancillary Documentation / Intertech") later in the day, and hope to post them soon. Would you be interested in doing the dissection for FK 11 ("Chapter 7")?

The dissection of the eighth chapter of Forbidden Knowledge, being the dissection of the sixth chapter of Morn's story within Forbidden Knowledge, has been posted:

FK 8 - Chapter 6