Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 9:11 am
1- If you don't take enough time for the audience to live in Cov's shoes before the rape (Lena)...well, nuff said
2- If you don't take enough time for the audience to love the Land before the rape (Wraiths)...well, nuff said
3- If you don't take enought time for the audience to care about the people in the Land before the rape (Burning Woodhelvin)...well, nuff said
4- If you don't take enough time for the audience to love the Giants, through FF's exposition alone, before the rape (in IW)...well, nuff said
5- If you don't take enough time for the audience to understand who Damelon is and what his prophecy entails, and care at all, before the rape (in IW)...well, nuff said
6- If you don't take enough time for the audience to understand who Loric is before the rape (in PTP when the gem turned green)...well, nuff said
7- If you don't take enough time for the audience to care about/understand: Kevin, Berek, Creator, Foul, Ravers, Lore, Lords, Haruchai, Ranyhyn/Ra,en,etc.
ugg.
A serious question here though:
Why does everyone want to hurry through the first part of LFB? Isn't it really, psychologically what the whole trilogy is about? I would think there's as much opportunity to split LFB into two and do the first half as a character study. Get to know Cov, then the people of the Land, then the Land, so that when the Wraiths get raped, we care, and when the people get raped, we care, and then we have the time in the second installment to do FF right, so that when the Giants are raped, we care, and on.
2- If you don't take enough time for the audience to love the Land before the rape (Wraiths)...well, nuff said
3- If you don't take enought time for the audience to care about the people in the Land before the rape (Burning Woodhelvin)...well, nuff said
4- If you don't take enough time for the audience to love the Giants, through FF's exposition alone, before the rape (in IW)...well, nuff said
5- If you don't take enough time for the audience to understand who Damelon is and what his prophecy entails, and care at all, before the rape (in IW)...well, nuff said
6- If you don't take enough time for the audience to understand who Loric is before the rape (in PTP when the gem turned green)...well, nuff said
7- If you don't take enough time for the audience to care about/understand: Kevin, Berek, Creator, Foul, Ravers, Lore, Lords, Haruchai, Ranyhyn/Ra,en,etc.
ugg.
A serious question here though:
Why does everyone want to hurry through the first part of LFB? Isn't it really, psychologically what the whole trilogy is about? I would think there's as much opportunity to split LFB into two and do the first half as a character study. Get to know Cov, then the people of the Land, then the Land, so that when the Wraiths get raped, we care, and when the people get raped, we care, and then we have the time in the second installment to do FF right, so that when the Giants are raped, we care, and on.