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A little bit of nature

Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 7:47 pm
by Reisheiruhime
Two haikus I thought up at 4 n the morning:

Trees
Trees-
Leafy and springy green,
Oak and Gilden,
Made for life to enjoy.

Cats
Cats-
Furry, with pointed ears,
Patterned coats and cute
Tails that twitch a lot.
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A bit of abstract thinking now, shall we? ;)

A Rose
A gentle rose:
Withering under the sun,
Drowning in the flood,
Crushed between the rocks,
And blown away by the wind.
The rose is my love.
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Yes, I know I can't rhyme. Depression has its uses. :) :wink:

Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 8:18 pm
by Infelice
A Rose is very good Turiya - a bit sad but very good :( :)

Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 8:27 pm
by Reisheiruhime
You really think so? Mom says I should get some of them copyrighted and make a book. I don't really think so though. Do you think that would be a wise move? :?

Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 8:49 pm
by Infelice
I can't see what harm it would do ..... I think its a good idea. But you need to feel comfortable about publishing your work ... if you like the idea do it. :)
I like reading your poems :)

Posted: Sun May 25, 2003 8:55 pm
by Reisheiruhime
...And I like writing them, so that arrangement works out great. ;)