Runes, Part 2, Chapter 10 - Troubled Sanctuary
Posted: Sat May 26, 2007 2:51 pm
Part II, Chapter 10 – Troubled Sanctuary
Who
Stave, Liand, Anele, Mahrtiir, Pahni, Bhapa, assorted Ranyhyn, waynhim, & ur-viles, and (100- ‘a score or two’, so 60+) Haruchai Masters, plus additional Masters, Handir, Galt, and the Mahdoubt.
In a Nutshell
The time-traveling group led by Linden enters the restored gates of Revelstone, finding more Masters, and… erm… sanctuary there that is quite troubling.
More Detail on What Happens
They make it into Revelstone, and their Illearth-Stone-backed-Demondim attackers semi-mysteriously fall back [what’s up with that?]. Beyond the gates in growing darkness, in the great forehall, and with the remaining bits of her Dirtying-up health-sense, Linden summons light and then dispenses healing to Stave (which we later find was a no-no) and Bhapa, including healing Bhapa’s cataract (pre-existing condition alert: in case you were wondering, that’s not going to be covered by RamenCo HMO). She also heals the worst hurts of the Ranyhyn, which mightily impresses the Ramen.
The group is ‘welcomed’ to Revelstone by Handir, the Voice of the Masters, who by his described need for a little ‘Just For Men’ hair treatment appears to be more advanced in years and a$$-kickin’ than the others. Linden isn’t that gracious with her reply, a demand for light. Its an ice-breaker, though, they get some light (sputtering and smoky torches - no wood lore to speak of, folks) and they start to negotiate the nature of their stay. Handir states that the waynhim and ur-viles will be led to the upland plateau of Glimmermere, where they can service their own Weird selves. After some discussion, Handir permits the same plateau treatment for the Ranyhyn, to be tended by the Ramen – and Ramen only, you horse-using Haruchai dweebs! Manethrall Mahrtiir reminds them. The remainder of the time-traveling group gets guest accommodations by the inherently hospitable Masters et al. For this chapter, et al means the Mahdoubt, but we’ll get back to her in a bit.
They have all noticed the use of the Illearth Stone against them. It is bad mojo (dw should know!) that they all know they cannot hope to withstand. Handir mentions that the Demondim have not yet truly wielded the Stone against them, since they’re all still alive to discuss it.
Linden gets all curious about the gates, wondering why they have them, as a way of showing her belief that their sanctuary is quite troubled. Handir says the Giants of the Search put them there as a gift. More on that later.
Handir introduces them to Galt, a Master who will be their pseudo-butler while in Revelstone. We find out a bit later in this chapter that Galt is a Humbled one – Masters of every generation fight for the status to become one of three Humbled, which involves a Berek/Covenant-style maiming of the last two digits of the right hand as a reminder not the engage in the folly that led to Korik, Sill, and Doar being mastered by the Illearth Stone in books past.
Anele is temporarily taken from them by the Masters, who wish to imprison him as a wielder of Earthpower. Linden trades a few empty (from her side) threats with the Masters around whether they intend to harm him – Anele really does not want to go with them, and when she reluctantly but helplessly lets them do it, he looks to Linden like she has betrayed him mightily, making her feel pretty bad – and Linden feels very bad about that, too.
Stave also tosses a dig at her by closing ranks with the Masters against her – and all for shaming him – by default through the eyes of his people – by healing him? [Dude, lighten up!] This makes Linden feel even worse than she already does.
Their accommodations now decided, they make their way into Revelstone, and Linden gets her own suite, where she reflects on what a pickle she is in, and all the forced choices she has made, and cogitates on the enigma of Anele and his random possessions that seemingly develop context from the material he stands upon. As she gains a better understanding of how these changes are worked upon him, she dreads having to make use of that knowledge to her benefit and his cost, and wonders if any good at all can come out her self-proclaimed-evildoings.
She also bathes, washes her clothes, and physically decompresses a bit, while she does her thinking. She is soon visited by Liand, who introduces the Mahdoubt. This multi-eye-colored old woman dressed in a strange and ugly patchwork robe seems to be a servant of the Masters. Speaking of which, while questioning Galt about why there are gates (which we were already told were a gift to the Land from the Giants of the Search, but Galt gives us more exposition on the how and when of it) Linden notices that his hand is maimed like Covenant’s, Jeremiah’s, Berek’s, etc. This is where she pumps him for information on why, and he briefly describes the Humbled. She is dutifully horrified at the finality of Haruchai thinking and planning, and shuts the door on him.
She learns more about why the Mahdoubt does what she does – she serves Revelstone, not the Masters, and we are led to believe that she does it simply because she is too old to tend sheep. Her carriage and her insight – along with her weird mismatched eyes - belie her servant trappings, so we are left wondering whether she is a little witchy or not.
The Mahdoubt leaves to get a second tray, Liand sits with her in silence, and she ferments on how she – like Covenant before her – is prepared to willfully endanger the Land’s future by focusing on the saving of a child, and how the Masters would never make such a decision as they. Liand leaves her to sleep, and she does so.
DW Analyzes
Handir: so far, the Voice of the Masters is just that – he is Locutus of the Haruchai, so he speaks as the will of the Masters. Because of the mind-speech they have, they all have the same information at their disposal, so we have little extra significance to attach to him at this point in the story.
Galt: The Humbled is an interesting concept, typical of the simple warrior brutality that we expect of the Haruchai people, though it bespeaks a little lack of advancement for the Haruchai as free thinkers, even after all this time has passed. They are a race of absolutes in a place that doesn’t tolerate that very well. The Haruchai in general, but the Humbled in particular, make me think of the written laws of our real world. They are put in place as a good and indestructible measure to make something important happen as the result of something bad that already happened, but left untended, it ends up existing for its own sake and harms the people it was nominally meant to protect, because it has lost relevance when placed against the sliding scales of judgement and shades of gray needed to get by in the real world. We would be in a terrible state without laws (and Haruchai), but laws (Laws) don’t save the realm, they enable other people to do so...
Linden: She’s tired. She’s expended herself extravagantly to do something that should have been impossible, Haruchai and ur-viles and waynhim and Ranyhyn have died keeping her alive, and she feels sick about it, that they are doing this for her and the Land, and she is doing it mostly for Jeremiah, which makes her feel dishonest, and perhaps slightly evil. [We need no comments from the THOOLAH peanut gallery, thank you very much...]
Liand: We don’t hear much from the Stonedownor this chapter, except a potential May-December romance with the Mahdoubt...?
Ramen: Aside from a typical outburst of outrage from Mahrtiir at the audacity of the Masters for not simply falling down in permanent salaam to the Ranyhyn, the Ramen aren’t the focus of the chapter either.
The Mahdoubt: From the way that she has been described, there is absolutely no way this the last we hear of the Mahdoubt. Is she to be a wielder of Earthpower where none is permitted? Is she a Raver spy? Is she just the current incarnation of the Unfettered? She has mojo, but how will it manifest, and will it really be in service to Revelstone, or just Liand?
THE POINT
To me, the focus of this chapter is Linden. The chapter starts out with her need for illumination – first literally: the forehall of Revelstone is dark because the Masters can apparently see in the dark, but she and her party can’t. Second, figuratively, Linden has to think through the choices she has already made, figure out the deal with Anele – i.e., how she can use his situation to her advantage and then feel really bad about it – how she can win him back from the Masters while still gaining their support to launch a trip to Mount Thunder where she is certain that Jeremiah is being held, and without being accosted by the Illearth Stone-powered Demondim that chased them to Revelstone in the first place.
The chapter ends with her snuffing out all lamps in her room but one before she slumps into exhaustion. So, again with the light/dark references. The Masters are in the dark in Revelstone, apparently literally as well as figuratively. Linden almost immediately sheds some light of her own using the Staff of Law. She then searches for additional light within herself by pondering her situation, and comes up with some ideas, but ends up doubting herself more than anything, and finds sleep.
DW's favorite bits from Chapter 2-10
“Linden did not dismount. She was reluctant to leave the security of Hyn’s back. Like the Staff, Hyn’s fortitude and loyalty enabled her to exceed herself. In spite of her exhaustion, she called up fire from the Staff and held it flaming over her head. If she could not accomplish anything else, she meant to at least see—
As the warm buttery light reached for the walls of the cavernous hall, she studied the condition of her companions.” This quote reinforces the light/dark metaphor, but also gives me pause with the concept of warm, buttery light. I am simply stunned by this concept. At the risk of overanalyzing, I wonder at the word choice of buttery. I am nearly certain that buttery was chosen for its color quality only. But I can’t help but wonder… buttery is good for biscuits, but perhaps not for light, if it leaves a greasy residue. Are we being very subtly prepared to be told that there are bad qualities to the Staff of Law? And yes, I do fear I am overanalyzing.
“She could not imagine what else he might have told his kinsmen.” A reference to the mind speech of the Haruchai, assuming that Stave has dished on everything to the other Masters, and a nice foreshadowing to the ton of harsh judgment that she fears is going to be leveled against her by them. She has experienced Haruchai judgment before…
“For all of her scrubbing, however, she could not remove the grass stains from her pants. They had become part of the fabric, indelible, and cryptic as runes.” I just like this imagery. And we thought he was only talking about laundry stains.
“Good cannot be accomplished by evil means.” She uses this as a reproach to herself. She believes she is attempting evil to make happen a greater good, but she doesn’t like the interim judgments she imposes on herself and others are wielding at her, because there is always the fear that she is just playing into Foul’s hand, and that impure choices darken the goal. If we lived in a fairy tale world, we wouldn’t have to make such choices, because the villains always wear black, and the heroes always wear white. Isn’t grittiness grand?
“The woman plainly did not doubt her own welcome. Bustling past Linden, she swept into the room: a short dowdy figure apparently well past middle age, with a crow’s nest of hair askew on her head, plump flesh hanging from her arms, and features which might have been sculpted by an unruly child during a tantrum. About her she wore a robe of astonishing ugliness, a motley patchwork of scraps and swaths seemingly selected for the unsuitability to each other, and stitched together at random.” Brilliant description that just jumps off the page! Is there any doubt left that the Mahdoubt is going to resurface in a later work as a colorful defender of Revelstone, or perhaps a destroyer of worlds?
dw
Who
Stave, Liand, Anele, Mahrtiir, Pahni, Bhapa, assorted Ranyhyn, waynhim, & ur-viles, and (100- ‘a score or two’, so 60+) Haruchai Masters, plus additional Masters, Handir, Galt, and the Mahdoubt.
In a Nutshell
The time-traveling group led by Linden enters the restored gates of Revelstone, finding more Masters, and… erm… sanctuary there that is quite troubling.
More Detail on What Happens
They make it into Revelstone, and their Illearth-Stone-backed-Demondim attackers semi-mysteriously fall back [what’s up with that?]. Beyond the gates in growing darkness, in the great forehall, and with the remaining bits of her Dirtying-up health-sense, Linden summons light and then dispenses healing to Stave (which we later find was a no-no) and Bhapa, including healing Bhapa’s cataract (pre-existing condition alert: in case you were wondering, that’s not going to be covered by RamenCo HMO). She also heals the worst hurts of the Ranyhyn, which mightily impresses the Ramen.
The group is ‘welcomed’ to Revelstone by Handir, the Voice of the Masters, who by his described need for a little ‘Just For Men’ hair treatment appears to be more advanced in years and a$$-kickin’ than the others. Linden isn’t that gracious with her reply, a demand for light. Its an ice-breaker, though, they get some light (sputtering and smoky torches - no wood lore to speak of, folks) and they start to negotiate the nature of their stay. Handir states that the waynhim and ur-viles will be led to the upland plateau of Glimmermere, where they can service their own Weird selves. After some discussion, Handir permits the same plateau treatment for the Ranyhyn, to be tended by the Ramen – and Ramen only, you horse-using Haruchai dweebs! Manethrall Mahrtiir reminds them. The remainder of the time-traveling group gets guest accommodations by the inherently hospitable Masters et al. For this chapter, et al means the Mahdoubt, but we’ll get back to her in a bit.
They have all noticed the use of the Illearth Stone against them. It is bad mojo (dw should know!) that they all know they cannot hope to withstand. Handir mentions that the Demondim have not yet truly wielded the Stone against them, since they’re all still alive to discuss it.
Linden gets all curious about the gates, wondering why they have them, as a way of showing her belief that their sanctuary is quite troubled. Handir says the Giants of the Search put them there as a gift. More on that later.
Handir introduces them to Galt, a Master who will be their pseudo-butler while in Revelstone. We find out a bit later in this chapter that Galt is a Humbled one – Masters of every generation fight for the status to become one of three Humbled, which involves a Berek/Covenant-style maiming of the last two digits of the right hand as a reminder not the engage in the folly that led to Korik, Sill, and Doar being mastered by the Illearth Stone in books past.
Anele is temporarily taken from them by the Masters, who wish to imprison him as a wielder of Earthpower. Linden trades a few empty (from her side) threats with the Masters around whether they intend to harm him – Anele really does not want to go with them, and when she reluctantly but helplessly lets them do it, he looks to Linden like she has betrayed him mightily, making her feel pretty bad – and Linden feels very bad about that, too.
Stave also tosses a dig at her by closing ranks with the Masters against her – and all for shaming him – by default through the eyes of his people – by healing him? [Dude, lighten up!] This makes Linden feel even worse than she already does.
Their accommodations now decided, they make their way into Revelstone, and Linden gets her own suite, where she reflects on what a pickle she is in, and all the forced choices she has made, and cogitates on the enigma of Anele and his random possessions that seemingly develop context from the material he stands upon. As she gains a better understanding of how these changes are worked upon him, she dreads having to make use of that knowledge to her benefit and his cost, and wonders if any good at all can come out her self-proclaimed-evildoings.
She also bathes, washes her clothes, and physically decompresses a bit, while she does her thinking. She is soon visited by Liand, who introduces the Mahdoubt. This multi-eye-colored old woman dressed in a strange and ugly patchwork robe seems to be a servant of the Masters. Speaking of which, while questioning Galt about why there are gates (which we were already told were a gift to the Land from the Giants of the Search, but Galt gives us more exposition on the how and when of it) Linden notices that his hand is maimed like Covenant’s, Jeremiah’s, Berek’s, etc. This is where she pumps him for information on why, and he briefly describes the Humbled. She is dutifully horrified at the finality of Haruchai thinking and planning, and shuts the door on him.
She learns more about why the Mahdoubt does what she does – she serves Revelstone, not the Masters, and we are led to believe that she does it simply because she is too old to tend sheep. Her carriage and her insight – along with her weird mismatched eyes - belie her servant trappings, so we are left wondering whether she is a little witchy or not.
The Mahdoubt leaves to get a second tray, Liand sits with her in silence, and she ferments on how she – like Covenant before her – is prepared to willfully endanger the Land’s future by focusing on the saving of a child, and how the Masters would never make such a decision as they. Liand leaves her to sleep, and she does so.
DW Analyzes
Handir: so far, the Voice of the Masters is just that – he is Locutus of the Haruchai, so he speaks as the will of the Masters. Because of the mind-speech they have, they all have the same information at their disposal, so we have little extra significance to attach to him at this point in the story.
Galt: The Humbled is an interesting concept, typical of the simple warrior brutality that we expect of the Haruchai people, though it bespeaks a little lack of advancement for the Haruchai as free thinkers, even after all this time has passed. They are a race of absolutes in a place that doesn’t tolerate that very well. The Haruchai in general, but the Humbled in particular, make me think of the written laws of our real world. They are put in place as a good and indestructible measure to make something important happen as the result of something bad that already happened, but left untended, it ends up existing for its own sake and harms the people it was nominally meant to protect, because it has lost relevance when placed against the sliding scales of judgement and shades of gray needed to get by in the real world. We would be in a terrible state without laws (and Haruchai), but laws (Laws) don’t save the realm, they enable other people to do so...
Linden: She’s tired. She’s expended herself extravagantly to do something that should have been impossible, Haruchai and ur-viles and waynhim and Ranyhyn have died keeping her alive, and she feels sick about it, that they are doing this for her and the Land, and she is doing it mostly for Jeremiah, which makes her feel dishonest, and perhaps slightly evil. [We need no comments from the THOOLAH peanut gallery, thank you very much...]
Liand: We don’t hear much from the Stonedownor this chapter, except a potential May-December romance with the Mahdoubt...?
Ramen: Aside from a typical outburst of outrage from Mahrtiir at the audacity of the Masters for not simply falling down in permanent salaam to the Ranyhyn, the Ramen aren’t the focus of the chapter either.
The Mahdoubt: From the way that she has been described, there is absolutely no way this the last we hear of the Mahdoubt. Is she to be a wielder of Earthpower where none is permitted? Is she a Raver spy? Is she just the current incarnation of the Unfettered? She has mojo, but how will it manifest, and will it really be in service to Revelstone, or just Liand?
THE POINT
To me, the focus of this chapter is Linden. The chapter starts out with her need for illumination – first literally: the forehall of Revelstone is dark because the Masters can apparently see in the dark, but she and her party can’t. Second, figuratively, Linden has to think through the choices she has already made, figure out the deal with Anele – i.e., how she can use his situation to her advantage and then feel really bad about it – how she can win him back from the Masters while still gaining their support to launch a trip to Mount Thunder where she is certain that Jeremiah is being held, and without being accosted by the Illearth Stone-powered Demondim that chased them to Revelstone in the first place.
The chapter ends with her snuffing out all lamps in her room but one before she slumps into exhaustion. So, again with the light/dark references. The Masters are in the dark in Revelstone, apparently literally as well as figuratively. Linden almost immediately sheds some light of her own using the Staff of Law. She then searches for additional light within herself by pondering her situation, and comes up with some ideas, but ends up doubting herself more than anything, and finds sleep.
DW's favorite bits from Chapter 2-10
“Linden did not dismount. She was reluctant to leave the security of Hyn’s back. Like the Staff, Hyn’s fortitude and loyalty enabled her to exceed herself. In spite of her exhaustion, she called up fire from the Staff and held it flaming over her head. If she could not accomplish anything else, she meant to at least see—
As the warm buttery light reached for the walls of the cavernous hall, she studied the condition of her companions.” This quote reinforces the light/dark metaphor, but also gives me pause with the concept of warm, buttery light. I am simply stunned by this concept. At the risk of overanalyzing, I wonder at the word choice of buttery. I am nearly certain that buttery was chosen for its color quality only. But I can’t help but wonder… buttery is good for biscuits, but perhaps not for light, if it leaves a greasy residue. Are we being very subtly prepared to be told that there are bad qualities to the Staff of Law? And yes, I do fear I am overanalyzing.
“She could not imagine what else he might have told his kinsmen.” A reference to the mind speech of the Haruchai, assuming that Stave has dished on everything to the other Masters, and a nice foreshadowing to the ton of harsh judgment that she fears is going to be leveled against her by them. She has experienced Haruchai judgment before…
“For all of her scrubbing, however, she could not remove the grass stains from her pants. They had become part of the fabric, indelible, and cryptic as runes.” I just like this imagery. And we thought he was only talking about laundry stains.
“Good cannot be accomplished by evil means.” She uses this as a reproach to herself. She believes she is attempting evil to make happen a greater good, but she doesn’t like the interim judgments she imposes on herself and others are wielding at her, because there is always the fear that she is just playing into Foul’s hand, and that impure choices darken the goal. If we lived in a fairy tale world, we wouldn’t have to make such choices, because the villains always wear black, and the heroes always wear white. Isn’t grittiness grand?
“The woman plainly did not doubt her own welcome. Bustling past Linden, she swept into the room: a short dowdy figure apparently well past middle age, with a crow’s nest of hair askew on her head, plump flesh hanging from her arms, and features which might have been sculpted by an unruly child during a tantrum. About her she wore a robe of astonishing ugliness, a motley patchwork of scraps and swaths seemingly selected for the unsuitability to each other, and stitched together at random.” Brilliant description that just jumps off the page! Is there any doubt left that the Mahdoubt is going to resurface in a later work as a colorful defender of Revelstone, or perhaps a destroyer of worlds?
dw