Infelice wrote:ringthane wrote:
I actually lost my first sale a month ago -- the publisher went under.

Bummer
ringthane wrote:If anyone's interested in reading my fantasy stuff I could post the link them on the writer's critique groups I belong to (if i could ever dig the URL out).
Post the link......There are a few people here that would be very interested.

I'd love to have these posted on my own site, which would make it easy, but unfortunately most publisher won't ever touch stuff that has already been posted on teh web since it's already considered "published" (it's a weird thing with first publishing rights).
Anyway, stories posted to writing/critique groups aren't considered 'published', so that's one way to get around that.
1. Ok, go to
www.heliumpeerreview.com/
2. Click on the short stories link on the lower left hand side
3. At the top of the page click search
4. search by the last name swartzfeger, click submit
you'll then see about half a dozen of my stories there to view (I think they're all in PDF).
Most of this stuff is about half a year old, most of my new stuff still hasn't been posted
A Parable For Savants-- short flash fiction. Was just a playful experiment with a different type of narrative voice.
Graffiti Heart-- one of my favorites, but it has an enourmous flashback toward the beginning of the story that really slows things down. Needs heavy revision. This is more along the lines of magic realism than fantasy.
Most Sacred Burning Heart of Bernie Berkowitz-- another experiment with a specific technique. I think it's a fun read but it's missing something.
Postcards From Sodom-- kind of a cross-genre story, not sure if it's fantasy or horror.
The Blessed Unfortunates-- I absolutely hate this story but my beta readers love it, and this has won two different short story contests. First story I ever wrote, January 03. My Donaldson influences probably show here a bit, and the only true fantasy I've done.
The Creator Had A Master Disk-- this is the one I recently lost the sale on. I love this story, but it's been turned down by major publishers because the twist ending is nothing more than a lame, predictable punchline. Plus a total lack of conflict doesn't help either.
The Tree Where Lost Dreams Die-- cool premise, completely amateurish execution. I still like it, but I'd probably ditch everything here and do a complete rewrite. (this managed to win third place in another contest and I for the life of me don't know how)
Dang, what the hell am I still doing up?!? Sorry for chewing your ears off!