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HEARTSONG

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 2:21 am
by Reisheiruhime
I just wrote this a minute ago. I dunno what's wrong with me. I think the toesocks are taking control of my brain.
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Heartsong

Heartsong:
still so wrong.
Never thinking what I want,
never saying what I think.

Heartsong:
in others' eyes,
the greatest wrong.

Sing, heart,
for they'll soon see:
the beauty in the world,
the wrongs they've comitted.
How can they halt their ways,
and not end their days?
Sing, heart!
You will show them how.

Soar through the heavens,
sing life into their thoughts.
Soar through the sea,
sing feeling into their minds.
Soar through their souls,
sing love into their hearts.

Heartsong,
no longer wrong.
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Yeah, that's it. They're taking over my brain and turning me into a hippie.

ALRIGHT!!!! Fight the system!!!! :)

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 3:09 pm
by Fist and Faith
Yes, sister! Don't let The Man keep you down!!! :)

Seriously, I like it. Some good stuff there.

Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2003 7:11 pm
by Gil galad
That was beautiful!

Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2003 11:36 pm
by Reisheiruhime
Really? You think so? Wow... Well, I guess I'll keep the toesocks then.

Thank you both for the feedback! :)

Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 6:23 pm
by danlo
Good job, kiddo! 8)