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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 4:45 am
by Menolly
et tu, balon?

Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 7:17 pm
by Goatkiller666
I think you meant to say "Et tu, balon!?"

(The Grammar Nazi strikes again!)

Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 7:36 pm
by Menolly
Yeah, I considered the exclamation point...

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:14 am
by Dread Poet Jethro
Will she set aside
Her low carb way of eating
While in Box of Shame?

If so, balon!'s pies
Will be a welcome respite
From diet of crow

Better yet, bake with
Splenda and almond flour
She'll eat without guilt

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:43 am
by Goatkiller666
No pies in the box of shame.

She can eat the box.

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 12:53 am
by Dread Poet Jethro
We're a PG board...
Limiting my repartee
In response to that

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 1:09 am
by Goatkiller666
<snerk>

I'm not sure which is a funnier inuendo... 'pie' or 'box'.

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 5:04 am
by Menolly
Goatkiller666 wrote:<snerk>

I'm not sure which is a funnier inuendo... 'pie' or 'box'.
Image

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 6:51 am
by Goatkiller666
Did anybody ever watch Pushing Daisies? Guy owned a store called "The Pie Hole".

Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 11:42 am
by [Syl]
Great show.

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 1:31 pm
by Orlando
Ah, I'm such a nerd!
Will send today. I thought I already sent it early but I guess I didn't.
I am so sorry.

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 2:01 pm
by [Syl]
You're lucky I was feeling lazy this weekend and only started outlining! :mrgreen:

Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:41 pm
by Orlando
I was so sure that I had sent it in early after I submitted my trial piece that I was just sitting back, waiting for results.

I'm so sorry. It won't happen again.

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:05 am
by [Syl]
Results are sent.

Just a note for future submissions, please try to change the subject line to emails that aren't directly responding to results. If you are responding directly to results and it's close to deadline, it's best if you make a new email subject line anyway. It makes it a lot easier for me to keep everything organized when preparing results.

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:10 am
by Menolly
I change the turn number in the subject line, and start a fresh composition each time. Does that work? Or are my submissions giving you problems?

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:14 am
by [Syl]
Yeah, yours are fine.

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:22 am
by Menolly
Coolness.

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 12:32 am
by Menolly
Autarch, sir.

In my results, Aliya says...
I remember it being on the edge of the jungle to the east of our people, near the corner closest to the Trunk.
I am trying to figure this out according to the map, but all I see to the east is what looks like a huge lake. The Trunk is southwest of Serenity's people, yes?

Unless the compass points of the map is not necessarily north at the top?

Awesome start to a story, though.
Thanks!

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:24 am
by [Syl]
West, obviously. She's confused. Understandably.

Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:34 am
by Menolly
So all else is "accurate," other than the direction?

*thinking this would make what took place happen somewhere in the forest/jungle between Nakoma and Nyx's people. no wonder there was a large feline involved and Nakoma is squawking at my door*