For Your Review: Of The Sky, Chapter One
Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2014 11:12 pm
Hi all,
I've been reviewing this with several people in the Writer's Circle and wanted to get some broader feedback. Generally speaking, just would like to know if you enjoyed this opening chapter and if you would continue reading it. I am working on Chapter 2 now but would like some independent validation, as it were.
This is a PDF so that I don't have to reformat for here, hope that's ok.
Whatever feedback you have please feel free to enter it here or PM me.
rdhope.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/of-t ... pleted.pdf
Thanks!
I've been reviewing this with several people in the Writer's Circle and wanted to get some broader feedback. Generally speaking, just would like to know if you enjoyed this opening chapter and if you would continue reading it. I am working on Chapter 2 now but would like some independent validation, as it were.
This is a PDF so that I don't have to reformat for here, hope that's ok.
Whatever feedback you have please feel free to enter it here or PM me.
rdhope.files.wordpress.com/2014/08/of-t ... pleted.pdf
Thanks!