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Werewolf's Kiss (poem)

Posted: Sun Sep 05, 2004 8:35 pm
by Dani
I have hit a dry spell in regards to writing stories :cry: but I did manage to write something for a poetry contest, which I posted below :)



WEREWOLF’S KISS

By Dani Myrick

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Night does not hide the scars

nor dull the searing pain

of life and laughter lost

never to be found again



Vigilant, she sits and waits

for furtive movement in the trees

something stirs within darkness

and she crouches to her knees



He slinks forward and whines

a creature of men no more

ruled instead by the full moon

subject only to the were-lore



Her tears fall gently down

mourning her lover’s form

torn between love and revulsion

wanting so much to scorn



Instead, she bares her soft throat

a delicacy he cannot resist

they join one last time in fervor

for a werewolf’s final kiss

Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:06 am
by Skyweir
8) DANI THAT IS OUTRAGEOUSLY EXCELLENT .. A BRILLIANT PIECE OF POETRY .. NICE RYTHM .. CLEVER STORY .. A STELLAR PIECE OF WORK

I really love this poem .. if you have any other stuff do post it .. this was really really good!!

:yourock: :goodpost: :bwave: :Hail:

Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:28 am
by Dani
WOW :!: I certainly didn't expect such a response! I consider poetry to be my weakest writing skill :D

Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 4:40 am
by duchess of malfi
Nonsense. All of the poems you have posted here have been first rate. :)

Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 5:55 am
by Skyweir
there are more?? ;)

Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 10:08 am
by Dani
Yes, there are more, Skyweir. I searched out and bumped up the ones you had not commented on :)

Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 12:25 am
by Skyweir
many thanks dani :)