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Return from dark
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 12:30 am
by CovenantJr
Regular readers may have noticed I often write in the first person - I just seem to write better that way. Well this one is first person and present tense, written today.
Announcement: This has been removed in my great purge of 31/8/05. I may send any or all of these to genre publications, and I don't want any issues because they're available here for free.
Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 6:31 pm
by CovenantJr
Announcement: This has been removed in my great purge of 31/8/05. I may send any or all of these to genre publications, and I don't want any issues because they're available here for free.
Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 7:20 am
by Avatar
Enjoyed the second installment a lot. Definite potential here.
Nice one Cj.
--Avatar
Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 6:59 pm
by CovenantJr
Thanks, Avatar
You're making me nervous. I'm not used to anyone besides Loremaster reading this stuff
Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 2:17 am
by Baradakas
Good stuff, Cov.
No need to be nervous, btw.
Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 7:33 am
by Avatar
Yeah, what he said.
By the way, just to make it worse, I read the second one
three[/i] times.
Thought I'd missed "you" killing the captain, so re-read to find it, realised I hadn't, and so read it again just for the fun of "seeing" him die like that.
--Avatar
Posted: Thu Jan 20, 2005 6:45 pm
by CovenantJr
Thanks guys
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2005 11:09 pm
by Cate
Oh Cov, that was absolutely exquisite! I was melted into it from the first line. You have a wonderful style. I love it. more, please.
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 12:36 am
by CovenantJr
You're very kind, thank you.
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:39 am
by Avatar
We're not really, you know.
--A