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rdhopeca
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The gas tasted like fresh banana. If only the pain had been so sweet.
Rob
"Progress is made. Be warned."
"Progress is made. Be warned."
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But it wasn’t sweet, pain never is. The gassy banana however kept repeating on him.
keep smiling
'Smoke me a kipper .. I'll be back for breakfast!'
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It should have been legal. It would have been legal if he'd only remembered not to kill the neighbor's wife.
Rob
"Progress is made. Be warned."
"Progress is made. Be warned."
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Sometimes you have to put it bluntly as the narrator. No one else in the story cared if she had "lived happily ever after" conclusion. 
