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Incognito
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Announcement: This has been removed in my great purge of 31/8/05. I may send any or all of these to genre publications, and I don't want any issues because they're available here for free.
Last edited by Incognito on Wed Aug 31, 2005 7:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Edge
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Always I wondered what lurked in the mist, when all along it was the mist that was lurking.
Love that line!
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Thank you :)
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Some of the lines need to be fixed, but largely I like it. I like it alot. Well done, Incognito!
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Post by Incognito »

You already know I appreciate your support, but it would be churlish not to say so in public. Thank you :)
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