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Reisheiruhime
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A little bit of nature

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Two haikus I thought up at 4 n the morning:

Trees
Trees-
Leafy and springy green,
Oak and Gilden,
Made for life to enjoy.

Cats
Cats-
Furry, with pointed ears,
Patterned coats and cute
Tails that twitch a lot.
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A bit of abstract thinking now, shall we? ;)

A Rose
A gentle rose:
Withering under the sun,
Drowning in the flood,
Crushed between the rocks,
And blown away by the wind.
The rose is my love.
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Yes, I know I can't rhyme. Depression has its uses. :) :wink:
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A Rose is very good Turiya - a bit sad but very good :( :)
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You really think so? Mom says I should get some of them copyrighted and make a book. I don't really think so though. Do you think that would be a wise move? :?
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I can't see what harm it would do ..... I think its a good idea. But you need to feel comfortable about publishing your work ... if you like the idea do it. :)
I like reading your poems :)
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Post by Reisheiruhime »

...And I like writing them, so that arrangement works out great. ;)
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