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Improvisations-Things I make up on the spot.

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One day I set out to find The Truth.As I had no idea where to look I simply started walking.And after looking under several dozen logs and rocks I came to a realization ,The Truth must not be hidden in this way that is,it must be more obvious.
So I set out across the universe taking galaxy wide strides,I crushed the heads of gods underfoot as if walking thrue a garden of snails.
And after I had crossed all known time and seen all things known and new I came to the ultimate realization.
The real Truth was inside of me,for I was the same as all.



I made this up sitting here,despite its brevity and use of poetic liscence what is it?A short essay?A poem of sorts?Or complete and utter bullcrap?
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Sunbaneglasses wrote:I crushed the heads of gods underfoot as if walking through a garden of snails.
I liked it all but the above was especially good.
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Sunbaneglasses wrote:
I crushed the heads of gods underfoot as if walking through a garden of snails.



I liked it all but the above was especially good.

my favorite line as well
you're more advanced than a cockroach,
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
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what do you have against snails? :shifty:
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i think it represents something.

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The hand upon my face......
Is it a black hand?
Is it a white hand?
A sick hand?
A hale hand?
The mark on my cheek.....
Is it a scar?
Is it a trophy?
My memories.........
Are they at war?
Which are heros?
Which are villans?
Is the war my balance?
Lies to self,lies to others
Truth in lies?
I can not close the valve
I think I am leaking.
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this hand upon my face...
is it a black hand?
a white hand?
a sick hand?
a hale hand?
the mark on my cheek...
is it a scar?
a trophy?
my memories...
are they at war?
which are heroes?
which are villains?
is the war my balance?
lies to self, lies to others
truth in lies?
i can not
close this valve
i think...
i am leaking.

no offense intended if you don't like it.
i like it, wish anyone would comment
on my stuff. :(
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