I've been working on a novel for a while now. I'll be writing a different, much easier, novel for this project. But, I've been struggling with the opening sentence for quite some time. I wrote a rough version of the prologue, but I hated the opening line. I found, like many writers, I was trying to write an opening sentence. It came out forced and obvious. I cut the first paragraph, and now the opening works.
I recommend we exchange such insights often. It will be a hard month for all of us. We will need all the help we can get.
"This is the sort of bloody nonsense up with which I will not put."
ya'll are a little bit ahead of me!! it's still halloween here in SF. i had already begun a thing i wanted to work on and am just using this little event to get myself to go ahead and crank on it.
just informed the mate that i would be involved in this thing and got a resounding "ah you aren't gonna do it." what more impetus do i need!! ha!
it may not make much sense when it's done but it WILL be done!!! i'm excited and ready to rock and roll. and khaliban, expect that i will check in here often for your handy advice!!!
write on.
you're more advanced than a cockroach,
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
you're more advanced than a cockroach,
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
Got about 700 words into my story last night, woke up with a million ideas swirling around in my head about it! Am about to start typing again. I'm tired today but exhilirated.
And just for Fist -- there is already one nakie woman scene.
Stopped mid paragraph for food. Latest stats: 1575 words completed. I don't think I'm up to doing this many words every day, yet. I'll see how it goes tonight and tomorrow.
Different time zones, duchess - took me until 10pm to get past the target, local time.
I've uploaded a short excerpt on my WriMo profile - one of the better paragraphs of my first day's work (and yes, I'm Murrin there too).
Edit: ended the day on 1834.
Last edited by I'm Murrin on Wed Nov 02, 2005 12:34 am, edited 1 time in total.
only 1050 words last night. not a great start and i HATE it. will begin again tonight and see how i can work it to make it something i would read!! (got interrupted by my husband cutting the heck out of his hand with an exacto knife!! blood everywhere!! my concentration went to hell.)
onward!!! write on you writers!!!
you're more advanced than a cockroach,
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
Lucimay wrote:only 1050 words last night. not a great start and i HATE it. will begin again tonight and see how i can work it to make it something i would read!! (got interrupted by my husband cutting the heck out of his hand with an exacto knife!! blood everywhere!! my concentration went to hell.)
onward!!! write on you writers!!!
Good grief! Yeah, I can see how your concentration could be destroyed by that! I'm sure things will go better for you tonight! I am doing a bit better than I thought -- when I knocked off for the night, I had nearly 2000 words in a bit over the first 24 hours. I'm sure I can't keep up that pace, though. But I'm writing again, and that's what matters.