If anyone has read it, can you tell me what you thought of it? Thanks

Moderator: I'm Murrin
Incredible stuff y'all, I'm hooked and this is on page 2!!!!!!!!Still wet from Gyoll we waited. In the recesses of my mind we stand shivering there even now. Just as all that appears imperishable tends towards its own destruction, those moments that at the time seem the most fleeting recreate themselves--not only in memory (which in the final accounting loses nothing) but in the throbbing of my heart and prickling of my hair, making themselves new just as our Commonwealth reconstitutes itself each morning in the shrill tones of its own clarions.