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Post by Furls Fire »

ohhhhh I like that Infelice! sooo peaceful :)
And I believe in you
altho you never asked me too
I will remember you
and what life put you thru.

~fly fly little wing, fly where only angels sing~

~this world was never meant for one as beautiful as you~

...for then I could fly away and be at rest. Sweet rest, Mom. We all love and miss you.

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Indeed. Very much like an actual Haiku. I remember reading somewhere, don't know if it's true, that all true Haikus should have a reference, however tenuous, to the seasons.
"It is not the literal past that rules us, save, possibly, in a biological sense. It is images of the past. Each new historical era mirrors itself in the picture and active mythology of its past or of a past borrowed from other cultures. It tests its sense of identity, of regress or new achievement against that past.”
-George Steiner
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Very nice, Infelice! :D
All lies and jest
Still a man hears what he wants to hear
And disregards the rest -Paul Simon

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Thanks. I have taught enough kids how to write the darned things. :)
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Hey, she's a ringer!!!!
All lies and jest
Still a man hears what he wants to hear
And disregards the rest -Paul Simon

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Gee.....just didnt want to flaunt my capabilities. :)

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Black enigma, ur-vile bred
Thou art Findail's Bane.

*not intentionally anyway*
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wow really great stuff!!

tis a gift!! ;)
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keep smiling 😊 :D 😊

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Thanks Sky :)
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;) :)
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Rockbrothers working
Revelstone will not forget
songs of long lost Home
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I love that one b&b. :)
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Sea and Stone Ur-Lord
The Balance That Binds the Earth
Be True, Else all Fails
Yes I guess we can all just get along !

Smurfy, simply Smurfy !!!

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By the Chosen One
I have Failed Most Terribly
Your Forgiveness Please
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The Land is darn cool.
It has niceness all around.
Shame I wasted it.
Do you think I like being this dangerous?
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I can Not save you
Now I dare not even try
Should She Fail, All Die
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soulbiter, winter.
summer flows in love's currents,
I drift in cold seas.
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fertile sun, sustain.
no blood shall be shed today!
three day feast, Sunbane.
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desert sun melts trees,
thirst screams soundless all around.
my soul must not melt.
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sun of pestilence,
children crying, stay inside.
buzzing everywhere.
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sun of rain, lightning.
the mithil runs strong again.
the Stonedown, it rests.
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