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From the lake they walk to Revelstone."And a short time later, the riders...drew the boat into a lake at the foot of Furl Falls. The lake was round and rough in shape, wide along its whole western side by Gilden and pine. It stood [can lakes stand? I thought they lay] at the base of the cliff--more than two thousand feet of sheer precipice--and the blue water came thundering down into it from the plateau like the loud heart's-blood of the mountains."
I read this and I sort of get a combination of the castle currently gracing our page and Petra (but done in white and polished) with a big tower off to the viewer's right perched over the only gates of the city."They passed around one foothill on the south side, and joined the road from the bridge below the lake. Eastward, the road worked almost straight up the side of a traverse ridge."
"Ahead over a few lower hills was Lord's Keep. The sight caught Covenant by surpirse, almost took his breath away. Revelstone was a masterwork. It stood in granite permanence like an enactment of eternity, a timeless achievement formed of mere lasting rock by some pure, supreme Giantish participation in skill."
"The eastern end of the plateau was finished by a broad shaft of rock, half as high as the plateau and separate from it except at the base, the first several hundred feet. This shaft had been hollowed into a tower which guarded the sole entrance to the Keep and circles of window rose up past the abutments to the fortified crown. But most of the Lord's Keep was carved into the mountain gut-rock under the plateau."
"A surprising distance from the tower, the entire cliff face had been worked by the old Giants--sheered and crafted into a vertical outer wall for the city, which, Covenant later learned, filled this whole, wedge-shaped prmontory of the plateau. The wall was intricately labored--lined and coigned and serried with regular and irregular groups of windows, balconies, butresses--orieled and parapeted--rought in a prolific and seemingly spontaneous multitude of details which appeard to be on the verge of crystallizing into a pattern. But light flashed and danced on the polished cliff face, and the wealth of variation in the work overwhelmed Covenant's senses, so that he could not grasp whever pattern might be there."
"But with his new eyes he could see the thick, bustling, communal life of the city. It shone from behind the wall as if the rock were almost translucent, almost lit from within like a chiaroscuro by the life-force of its inhabitants."
"The road ran parallel to the cliff to its eastern edge, then turned uptoward the tall doors in the southeast base of the tower. The gates--a might slab of rock on either side--were open in the free welcome of peace; but they were notched an beveled and balanced so that they could swing shut and interlock, closing like teeth."
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*snort*Esmer wrote:every guy is Vain about his Peter.