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Death Of The Bright Side

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DEATH OF THE BRIGHT SIDE

Any fool can see the outcome,
Nor will this be a tale to tell.
Anyone can see from any angle,
I'm gonna let this one slip away as well.
How the pain strikes an unclad heartbeat,
Each second is a splinter of ice.
That strikes to the soul of hope and dreaming,
And leers on while the bright side dies.
Do you think I like being this dangerous?
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Landwaster wrote:DEATH OF THE BRIGHT SIDE

Any fool can see the outcome,
Nor will this be a tale to tell.
Anyone can see from any angle,
I'm gonna let this one slip away as well.
How the pain strikes an unclad heartbeat,
Each second is a splinter of ice.
That strikes to the soul of hope and dreaming,
And leers on while the bright side dies.
Land,
These are terrific song lyrics by the way.
Though I get a very strong general impression from this, I have to suppose that the Bright Side is a bit subjective to the reader. I'm sure you have something specific in mind. Very thought provoking.
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As in "always look on the bright side of life" :)
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Talk about looking past the obvious. :-)

I'm reading "Witness of the End." .
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Its taking a while, but I've gotten past the death of Shana and the student is realing from the intruder. Pretty cool
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Shhh ... put it inside a spoiler :8 Hehe ... COOL! I knew money'd get yers in!
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