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Reisheiruhime
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Post by Reisheiruhime »

I just wrote this a minute ago. I dunno what's wrong with me. I think the toesocks are taking control of my brain.
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Heartsong

Heartsong:
still so wrong.
Never thinking what I want,
never saying what I think.

Heartsong:
in others' eyes,
the greatest wrong.

Sing, heart,
for they'll soon see:
the beauty in the world,
the wrongs they've comitted.
How can they halt their ways,
and not end their days?
Sing, heart!
You will show them how.

Soar through the heavens,
sing life into their thoughts.
Soar through the sea,
sing feeling into their minds.
Soar through their souls,
sing love into their hearts.

Heartsong,
no longer wrong.
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Yeah, that's it. They're taking over my brain and turning me into a hippie.

ALRIGHT!!!! Fight the system!!!! :)
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Fist and Faith
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Post by Fist and Faith »

Yes, sister! Don't let The Man keep you down!!! :)

Seriously, I like it. Some good stuff there.
All lies and jest
Still a man hears what he wants to hear
And disregards the rest
-Paul Simon

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Gil galad
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Post by Gil galad »

That was beautiful!
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Post by Reisheiruhime »

Really? You think so? Wow... Well, I guess I'll keep the toesocks then.

Thank you both for the feedback! :)
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Post by danlo »

Good job, kiddo! 8)
fall far and well Pilots!
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