The One Tree, Chapter 4: The Nicor of the Deep

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The One Tree, Chapter 4: The Nicor of the Deep

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Boy, I have been too busy lately, and I really blundered by reviewing this chapter instead of 5 & 6, like I promised to. Fortunately, Dromond was kind enough to switch with me and he'll do Chapter 6. Whew. :oops:

Okay, here we go:

We begin with quite a mess. Covenant lies dying, the result of yet another attack by a Raver, and unreachable due to a protective cocoon formed from his own white gold. Linden blames herself for the situation, because she tried to ‘possess’ Thomas in order to heal him. Now, the possession itself is interesting. Was Linden truly trying to do anything more than help Thomas? If so, was she tempted by the power of the white gold, corrupted by the touch of venom, or does she distrust herself so much that she cannot accept the possibility of her own innocence? Whatever it is, she blames herself for the situation.

Pitchwife tries to bring Linden out of he depression; tries to get her to focus on Covenant:
”He lives yet, Chosen. He lives. And while he lives, there must be hope. Fix your mind upon that. While we live, it is the meaning of our lives to hope.”
After some discussion, the Giants decide the only way to reach Covenant is to get Starfare’s Gem moving again towards the One Tree. This seems ridiculous to Linden; how can you move a ship with no wind? The preparations to move Starfare’s Gem were even more baffling to Linden. Confused, Linden keeps watch on Thomas, in case something changes.

The next morning Linden finds most of the Giants have gone to the prow (front) of the ship. Torn between her curiosity and the need to watch Covenant, she finally decides to check Sevinhand’s broken arm. After she sees it has been properly set and is healing, Sevinhand explains what the Giants are planning:
”Heft Galewrath will attempt a calling of Nicor. That is perilous.” The flinch in his eyes showed that he was personally acquainted with the danger. “Mayhap there will be sore and instant need for a healer. It is Galewrath who ends the healing of Starfare’s Gem-yet the gravest peril will befall her. Will you not offer your aid?”
Linden agrees, and leaves Cail to watch over Covenant. She goes to the prow, and Pitchwife explains what the calling of Nicor is all about. Apparently, it can be quite dangerous, and he shares that he has seen the process take the life of the caller. Pitchwife also tells Linden about what the Elohim believe to be the origins of the Nicor. According to the Elohim, the Nicor are the children of the Worm of the World’s End. Of course, Linden understands little of this, except for a glimmering of the danger involved. Linden watches intently as Galewrath attempts the summoning.

The calling of Nicor is a strange process; first, a large rope is tied to a large iron ring. Using two small boats, three Giants take the ring out into the water, and when Galewrath is satisfied with her position, she pulls out a drumhead, places it in the water, and starts beating it in ‘an intricate, cross-grained rhythm’.

When the Nicor appears, Linden suddenly fears it will ram Starfare’s Gem. Worrying about Thomas’ safety; she crosses the deck it time to fall into Cail’s arms as the massive wave caused by the Nicor hits Starfare’s Gem.
Gripping Cail for balance as the Giantship resettled itself, Linden threw a glance downward and saw the colossal length of the Nicor still passing the keel. The creature was several times as long as Starfare’s Gem.
After a few anxious moments, Galewrath and her helpers return to the ship, having succeeded at looping the snout of the Nicor. Now the Giants begin to stop the cable that is unreeling. Slowly, they stop the cable, and the Giantship is moving as fast as the Nicor can pull it.

Now, the Giant’s biggest concern is if the Nicor decides to sound; if they are caught unprepared, Starfare’s Gem could be sunk by the beast. After a while, the Nicor decides to break free. As the Giants try to put out more cable, one Giant is a second too slow and is smashed into the prow. As the Giants regain their lost line, Linden uses her health sense to see how badly the Giant is injured.
She saw his shattered bones as if they were limned in light, felt his shredded tissues and internal bleeding as though the damage were incused on her own flesh. He was severely mangled. But he was still alive. His heart still limped; air still gurgled wetly from his pierced lungs. Perhaps he could be saved.
Just as Linden starts to heal the Giant, Cail informs her that Covenant is stirring. She can sense that if Thomas is to be saved, it is now; unfortunately, the Giant cannot live long enough to wait for her to take care of Covenant.
She could not endure it. Intolerable that either of them should be lost!
Linden gets Galewrath to apply pressure to the worst places on the broken Giant, and goes to help Covenant.
With a wrench of nausea, she felt white fire collecting in Covenant’s right side. Gathering against the venom. In his delirium, blind instinct guided him to direct the power inward, at himself, as if he could eradicate the poison by fire. As if such a blast would not also tear his life to shreds.
Deliberately putting herself in the line of fire should Covenant use his white gold, Linden uses her percipience to appeal to him. In his mind she shouts “Covenant! Don’t!”
Covenant hears her and disperses the white gold blast, harming no one. Now that his protective caul is gone, Linden tells Cail and Brinn to give Covenant diamondraught, and lots of it.

Linden gathers her strength, and returns to the injured Giant. She uses her abilities to stabilize him, and he smiles to her as he regains consciousness. Exhausted, Linden returns to watch over Covenant once more.

By dusk, the Starfare’s Gem has passed out of the calm zone, and the First cuts loose the line binding them to the Nicor.
Dandelion don't tell no lies
Dandelion will make you wise
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dAN wrote:when Galewrath is satisfied with her position, she pulls out a drumhead, places it in the water, and starts beating it in ‘an intricate, cross-grained rhythm’.
Everytime I read this I have an immediate vision of the Fremen in Dune using their thumpers to summon Sand worms. Speaking or worms. That the Nicor are the children of the Worm of the World's End, that the Worm is the eater of millions of stars-giving rise to the concept of a blackhole gaining so much intensity as it feeds that life grows on it's surface--a truly wild concept! The Elohim's connection to stars is something I've always maintained: that they were the Creator's children (stars) and fell to the Land's earth via 'the wounded rainbow story".

But I precede myself, I'm very exicted--maybe it's the sailor in me, or lack of water in New Mexico--this is one of the coolest chapters in the entire series. Just for sheer power and action! The Nicor are huge, and even Giants can barely control one. This is a struggle of sheer strenght of epic proportions. Physical strenght as opposed the other forms of 'power'. Yes I can see a little Moby Dick and Dune influence here but come on--between the story of the Worm, the intricate nautical research, TC's psychological/medical shutdown that morphs into a shutdown of the winds and seas of the Land's earth itself (not to mention the corresponding condition of his body on the altar on our earth), Linden's healings and inner struggle with power and possession-then throw back in the Giant vs. Nicor sheer will to move the dromond in order to bring TC back to life!

What's that say? What's that say!? The implications and the storytelling are absolutely amazing! Whew! :faint: Ay yi--I better let someone else respond before I turn into a babbling puddle of water! :P
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dAN wrote:Linden blames herself for the situation, because she tried to ‘possess’ Thomas in order to heal him. Now, the possession itself is interesting. Was Linden truly trying to do anything more than help Thomas? If so, was she tempted by the power of the white gold, corrupted by the touch of venom, or does she distrust herself so much that she cannot accept the possibility of her own innocence? Whatever it is, she blames herself for the situation.
My best guess is the latter. She's just (both in response to the Raver's presence, and perhaps as an unconscious response to her initial joy in Starfare's Gem itself) relived her father's death, after all. Her guilt looks to me like a mixture of her principled objection to "possession" even when used to help, her self-distrust, and the memory of Gibbon-Raver's accusations. "Cannot accept the possibility of her own innocence," btw, is a very Donaldsonian turn of phrase, and one that remains true of Linden right until the last pages of WGW, when she finally discovers that her power
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I was struck by one thing Pitchwife said while trying to bring Linden around:
If you are capable of wrath, you are capable of hope.
This reminds me of the adage that the opposite of love is indifference, not hate. And of Lois McMaster Bujold's Paladin of Souls, in which a character who's been chosen for a sacred task never speaks to any of her five gods without cursing, for half the book. The gods don't mind: as long as she's cursing she's still conversing with them, still engaged!
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Nicor! Goes the cry! What a fascinating creature to behold were it possible for us. Donaldson seems to bring to life the horrific sea-monsters of old in our own world. And to these Giants they're ballsy enough to attempt (temporary) mastery of just one. Still the attempt was seemingly their only alternative.
Apparently the Starfare's Gem is just too massive and heavy for a group of giants in a long boat to attempt to tow it.
Linden dispises (pardon the pun) posession and it's understandable. While she waits Donaldson just throws a wrench into the works by having a Giant (Cable Seadreamer) get severely wounded right about the same time that Covenant begins to comes back to himself. A battle of CHOICE for her. Linden courageously however does both as quickly as possible.
Has not Pitchwife avowed that she is "well Chosen!"

Hate to be Covenant when that Diamonddraught hang-over hits him. Whoo... whee!

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Good summary, dANdeLION! Got ahead of yourself chapter-wise, eh? Works for me...

Couldn't agree more with danlo about this chapter. I love it! The encounter with the Nicor is one of TOT's many great scenes that makes the book such a mind-blowing read. What makes a Nicor so terrifying is, of course, its sheer size: we think a Giantship is pretty impressive...then THIS thing comes along! In all the previous Covenant books, we've never come across a being as physically immense as a Nicor. SRD is tapping into people's atavistic fear and awe of the deep sea and its unknown terrors (them sea monsters, as Seafoam mentioned). The moment when Linden "threw a glance downward and saw the colossal length of the Nicor still passing the keel" puts chills up my spine. It's reminiscent of earthly sailors' accounts of giant squid that swam by their vessels. Go up several orders of magnitude and you have the Nicor.

Along with its size, a Nicor inspires awe because it is "an offspring of the Worm." So a Nicor is a tangible link to the cosmic underpinning of that world.

In his series Cosmos, Carl Sagan was fond of saying "we are all star stuff." That science axiom is echoed in the story of the Worm:
And while the Worm rested, the power of the stars wrought within it. From its skin grew excrescences of stone and soil, water and air, and these growths multiplied upon themselves and multiplied until the very Earth beneath our feet took form. Still the power of the stars wrought, but now it gave shape to the surface of the Earth, forging the seas and the land. And then was brought forth life upon the Earth. Thus were born all the peoples of the Earth, the beasts of the land, the creatures of the deep--all the forests and greenswards from pole to pole. And thus from destruction came forth creation, as death gives rise to life.
Just as a star destroys itself in a supernova, in the process creating the heavier elements needed to build things like rock, soil, water and the molecules of life itself. (Cosmos theme plays in background 8) )
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Seafoam Understone wrote:Donaldson just throws a wrench into the works by having a Giant (Cable Seadreamer) get severely wounded right about the same time that Covenant begins to comes back to himself. A battle of CHOICE for her.
Cable Seadreamer is not the injured Giant in this chapter. We don't find out until Chapter 5 who he is. Or tomorrow, in my Dissection of chapter five. :D
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Tell me if she laughs or cries
Blow away dandelion


I'm afraid there's no denying
I'm just a dandelion
a fate I don't deserve.


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That's right, its not him--Cable does attempt to volunteer for the Nicor sounding/snare team but the First won't let him, "...I cannot afford to lose the Earthsight."
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dANdeLION wrote:
Seafoam Understone wrote:Donaldson just throws a wrench into the works by having a Giant (Cable Seadreamer) get severely wounded right about the same time that Covenant begins to comes back to himself. A battle of CHOICE for her.
Cable Seadreamer is not the injured Giant in this chapter. We don't find out until Chapter 5 who he is. Or tomorrow, in my Dissection of chapter five. :D
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Just a couple of favorite "Nicor" quotes:

There are a number of examples of SRD's stark imagery that literally blow me out of the water, as it were, in this chapter. When I marked this one it stuck in my head for days,
Without their sails, the masts above her looked skeletal against the paling sky, like boughs of shorn of leaves, of life. Starfare's Gem was little more than a floating rock under her (Linden)--a slab of stone crucified between water and sky by the death of all winds. And Covenant, too, was dying: his respiration had become perceptively shallower. more ragged. He wore his power intimately, like a winding sheet.
and, of course, this classic quote,
Grunting with exertion, the Giants heaved on the hawser. Their feet seemed to clinch the granite of the deck, fusing ship and crew into a single taut organism. One arm's-lenght at a time, they drew the cable. More of the crew came to their aid. The dromond began to gain on the Nicor.
...beyond great stuff (awed!) 8O
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Linden's choice (life of one Giant versus possible fate of the earth in Covenant's life) reminds me of the choice Covenant made in TPTP...the life of one little girl versus the possible fate of the Land...
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I was thinking, how does the ship stay afloat? It's rock right? And then if it's so massive, how could wind alone move it?
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jacob Raver, sinTempter wrote:I was thinking, how does the ship stay afloat? It's rock right?
The density of granite is 2.75 g/cm³. The density of steel is 7.8 g/cm³.

Steel is much heavier than granite, and they make ships out of steel. So a ship made out of granite is entirely feasible.
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Fair point jacob Raver - I've often wondered how a stone ship as big as a castle floats on the sea.

The Giants use Gildenlode keels and rudders to power and steer their ships - stories and songs that last the whole day long.

Wow! I'm going to have to read The One Tree again, soon.
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Krazy Kat wrote: The Giants use Gildenlode Rudders to power and steer their ships - stories and songs that last the whole day long.
The Giants in the Land had gildenlode rudders made available to them by the lillianrill. The Giants from Home had no such lore.
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They had the first ward even before the New Lords.

They may have even brought Gilden trees to the Land. They cultured the Giant Woods for sea travel.
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Krazy Kat wrote:They had the first ward even before the New Lords.

They may have even brought Gilden trees to the Land. They cultured the Giant Woods for sea travel.
I seriously doubt the Giants used anything from Giant Woods (a remnant of the One Forest.) Pitchwife demonstrated some variant of stone lore with his pitch, but beyond that, and the instance of gildenlode use, the Giants never used any kind of lore as the Lords did.
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From the chapter Tull's Tale:

The Land which the Old Lords had given to the Giants for home was wide and fair. Enclosed by hills on the south, mountains on the west, and the Sunbirth Sea on the east, it was a green haven for the shipwrecked voyagers. But although they used the Land - cultivated the rolling countryside with crops of all kinds, planted immense vineyards, grew whole forests of the special redwood and teak trees from which they crafted their huge ships - they did not people it. They were lovers of the sea...

Yes, my mistake. Tull made no mention of Gilden trees.
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The Coercri Giants made ships of wood.

The were supposed to get Gildenlode keels and rudders, but I am not sure if they ever got them. (There was a reference to them being scavenged to make lillianrill arrows for the defense of Revelstone,
as they were never delivered.) They certainly never sailed off for Home with them.

The Giants of Home, during the Second Chronicles, surely had ships of granite. It's unclear if the Giants of Home of the First Chronicles did.

So its unclear if the Coercri Giants didn't know how to make ships of stone entirely, or if they were merely unable to do that stranded as they were in the Land.
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I think the events in the 1st chron is pulling this thread off course.
But I'm sure the coercri Giants knew how to craft granite - they had made Revelstone!

Maybe their ships were built of both stone and wood, although it's been ages since I've read the One Tree and my memory of the story is a bit hazy.

I looked in my dictionary for the word nicor. The nearest I have is the Nicobar Islands: a group of 19 islands in the Indian Ocean, south of the Andaman Islands, with which they form a territory of India.

Is the plural of nicor, nicors? Typically Giantish! :D
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Krazy Kat wrote:But I'm sure the coercri Giants knew how to craft granite - they had made Revelstone!
Indeed. But did they know how to make granite ships? Could they find the kind of granite that they needed?
Krazy Kat wrote:Is the plural of nicor, nicors? Typically Giantish! :D
I think the plural of Nicor is Nicor.

"The calling of Nicor is hazardous."

"We are beset by Nicor."
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