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Prayer for Answers

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One day I prayed to god,

not knowing what god was,

not knowing if god was,

asking merely to find out.



My gaze fell upon a woman,

standing in a park

by her daughter's lemonade stand

keeping the secret of all secrets

that the cost benefit analysis of the stand

resulted in a slight deficit for the family through the summer,

knowing that by next summer's end the daughter

would be on to some other more or less trivial pursuits.
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Loved it. Well done.
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Holsety wrote:keeping the secret of all secrets

that the cost benefit analysis of the stand

resulted in a slight deficit for the family through the summer...
Yessss, wonderful! :clap:
"People without hope not only don't write novels, but what is more to the point, they don't read them.
They don't take long looks at anything, because they lack the courage.
The way to despair is to refuse to have any kind of experience, and the novel, of course, is a way to have experience."
-Flannery O'Connor

"In spite of much that militates against quietness there are people who still read books. They are the people who keep me going."
-Elisabeth Elliot, Preface, "A Chance to Die: The Life and Legacy of Amy Carmichael"
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Post by Linna Heartbooger »

I'm so curious now if this is a true story...
"People without hope not only don't write novels, but what is more to the point, they don't read them.
They don't take long looks at anything, because they lack the courage.
The way to despair is to refuse to have any kind of experience, and the novel, of course, is a way to have experience."
-Flannery O'Connor

"In spite of much that militates against quietness there are people who still read books. They are the people who keep me going."
-Elisabeth Elliot, Preface, "A Chance to Die: The Life and Legacy of Amy Carmichael"
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