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A Grace Tank For the Forgotten Friend: The Poems Of bbf

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Sand

Prosperous silicon,
please pray for man.
To think there is more of you,
than can ever be man.

Please dream up a conscious thought,
A silicon mind vision.
Think hard on the subject of humanity,
hold that thought in your mind's vision.

Take the thinker, thinking of science;
listen to his complaints about religion.
I bet you have more to say on the subject,
than any scientist can say about religion.

I take comfort Silicon,
that you will outlive my thoughts.
That you will be a grinding instant,
between oblivion and my thoughts.

Good gosh, a sand castle built by Josh,
that is the fluid price you give man.
A days diversion and an aesthetic treat,
rolled into one, and never for an instant do we thank you.
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i really like this one bff.

i like the repeating of words man/man, vision/vison, religion/religion, thoughts/thoughts...

the good gosh/Josh is a device i often use...

well done.
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Lars

I had a candid friend when I was 15
We were pen pals and we were rainy day rivals.

Soup, sandwich, toast and an orange.
I ate it, I left and I hit his mailbox.


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Sweet painted river,
just like a human liver

Sweat drenched socks
just like falling rocks

A friend's loving kiss
just like a lovely mist

Who created all these things?

It was God,
It was God,

Paganism is wrong.
How can a person's mind create religion?
Isn't that narcissistic and wrong?

It wasn't Thor,
It wasn't Tyr,

by babybottomfeeder 2012

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Hi folks,

poetry is fun and easy but I would like to talk to you about another artistic outlet. I'm talking about my artistic outlet when it comes to my religion. I believe a person should express religious fervor the way Bach or Beethoven did, through art. I know that there is one true god that is God and that paganism is wrong and selfish. I believe if you are kidding yourself with the trappings of religion, then you might as well turn away from God all together. We have a choice to turn away from God but why turn to your own made up gods? Sounds boring and time consuming. I bet I could hollow out a log and use it as a boat in the time it takes for some people to claim that they are pagans.

I hope my artistic feelings did not offend any one.
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I'd like to propose
When preachy prose you compose
Take it to the Close
Yes, I am an alt
Whose? An open secret to
Attentive Watchers
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Dread Poet Jethro wrote:I'd like to propose
When preachy prose you compose
Take it to the Close
i will have to repectfully disagree with you DPJ. or I will have to move a lot of my work that may not seem religious at first.

but you are still tops with me DPJ. :)
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Slightly recast, babybottomfeeder wrote:There is one true god
That is God; paganism
Is wrong and selfish
I get your point, Sarge
What I object to is when
Other faiths get dissed

All are entitled
To believe as they see fit
The All loves us all...
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for Daniel Johnston (wherever you may find your self)

somebody push play...
Tyr gave a hand
to the lower wolf,
what i wouldn't give.
a bolt out of the grey
constant constables are
keeping the watch...
a cloud of smoke
as she wanders after
her horse ( a jack-
ass really ) stop.
Lenin, Marx
Marx, Lennon
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Dread Poet Jethro wrote:
Slightly recast, babybottomfeeder wrote:There is one true god
That is God; paganism
Is wrong and selfish
I get your point, Sarge
What I object to is when
Other faiths get dissed

All are entitled
To believe as they see fit
The All loves us all...
bbf is our Questing Beast?? :biggrin:

so who is our Fisher King?
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small aquatic bridge dweller

Ladies and gentlemen,
it has come to my
attention to look at my
land called Fairy Knight
Watch. in hands become
the back biting and
index space of permanent
claying. It is not only the
activity of each strike that
was bizarre, discussion is
an altar of unethical nature?

What happens when the
white whale is defeated?
It is not necessary to
have two questions on
the altar? I say bash,
bash as mascot toll roads
flop. I joined this discussion
forum to hit hard and change
the questions as they do
not want to wash your thirty
years of discussion on the
rules of life forum. Who will
post profiteer stories and
poems? and the position
that you want to discuss
on the earthquake are
fun bag ladies. pancakes?

give me twenty! But who
cares? Big deal! Fast port
is the altar!I want to see
the creative flow. I want
to read. Read the fancy
pastry. For those who
walked as you call it?
Feet. Pop - up, for the
people, allow then, us to
delay our only sauce
imagination and at the
elbows and we start to
build a fantasy of the
discussions that have
not yet thought to discuss.

See which makes me a
moderator and do the
creative fun discussion
section. You can post t
he combined lines, art,
politics, religion and
artistic environment of
the non-filtered and
finally more positive etc..

I do not see on the Web
that site of topic hearings
died, but if the more so
mundane subject popularity
is an indication, then I say
then relax Knight shows.

Allow me to remain on the
path of light, causing all
monkeys that are tired of
his fellow brother soldiers,
knowing well and well,
he was made Court marshall.

Who died of treason? Who
is with me? At the bottom
of the feeder is the water
that collects or near the
lower part of the body.
Water may be the ocean,
Lake, River, or a dreamer.
Many lower feeders are
able to burrow deeply into
all these fictional creatures,
which in fact are the starting
point as a collection of Psyche
without any real meaning....
Lenin, Marx
Marx, Lennon
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Post by Worm of Despite »

Null: I am no longer moderator of this board, but I would suggest that maybe put your own poems in your own thread? This is BBF's thread and while he may not mind I don't want to set a precedent of us putting our creations in others' areas.

That said: one of the reasons I was called to task as a moderator here was stickying this thread. I gave valid reasons but if it needs to be unstickied fair enough. It was quite a debate. And yet the Admins are purportedly watching the forum and yet they haven't removed this thread's sticky.

I will try my best to moderate without mod powers and without support. :D
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worm - it is a poem in dedication to bbf. created entirely from his words, recast and remade in his image...
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I see. Unfortunately BBF is no longer with us, but if I ever speak to him again I'll let him know!
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Worm of Despite wrote:I see. Unfortunately BBF is no longer with us, but if I ever speak to him again I'll let him know!
hold out hope...
Lenin, Marx
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Post by babybottomfeeder »

Ronlet Dragdon

Mercury, the god of fire
Please help me with my desire
To take on my enemies
To take on all feelings of badness
To take on all the feelings of my friends.
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