Here's another mess sketch, with a better eye contact. I don't know if I have interest to clean it up. Also note this is a post-WGW, straight-backed Pitchwife, but as far as I recall, Linden fixed only his lungs and spine, not the zillion other deformities and asymmetries. Hence that face (which went through half a dozen revisions; he's difficult to draw) and those awful clavicles.
New Pitch/Gossamer mess [edited]
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I can't see the newest image either.
I like the previous version. The battered moon is an especially nice touch.
If I have to give constructive criticism:
1) The second version is of course B&W but I hope that in the final version there will be more contrast between the couple and the background.
2) Shouldn't warrior Gossamer be more muscular than her handyman Pitchwife? Is his bucket of pitch that heavy?
I like the previous version. The battered moon is an especially nice touch.
If I have to give constructive criticism:
1) The second version is of course B&W but I hope that in the final version there will be more contrast between the couple and the background.
2) Shouldn't warrior Gossamer be more muscular than her handyman Pitchwife? Is his bucket of pitch that heavy?
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