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Sometimes [discussions] can even be light hearted, though the concept may offend your dour sensibilities.
"Dour sensibilities," eh? Kind of like the books we're are all here discussing? Kind of like the main character this forum is dedicated to discussing? In this context, I'll take that as a compliment.

Honestly, if SRD himself dropped in for a quick post, I think he'd have the same reaction. At least, when I read through the GI, he seems to express the same frustration with this kind of speculation.

Yes, I know that my revised "question" isn't what you all were explicitly setting out to answer, but in order to play this game, that is exactly what you have to do: ignore Donaldson's point.

I'm not here trolling or trying to put people down. I just feel strongly about my favorite author--something I probably share with most of you here. Personally, I don't read him for demonstrations of battle tactics, I read him for his revelations into what it means to be human. But if you all want to discuss things that go counter to his story for the fun of it, I certainly cannot stop you. Surely you can withstand a criticism or two in the process.

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Malik23 wrote:Yes, I know that my revised "question" isn't what you all were explicitly setting out to answer, but in order to play this game, that is exactly what you have to do: ignore Donaldson's point.
As I said, that is exactly what I was asking. Believe me, I understand Donaldson's books as well as anyone, and I grasp his point perfectly well. This topic was an exercise in light-hearted whimsy; and judging by the previous eight pages, it didn't offend many people. If you don't want to take part, that's fine, no-one is asking you to. But reviving a long-dead topic for no other reason than to gripe about its lack of validity is just rude.
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Yes, it was only a light hearted intellectual exercise. Just a way to talk and have fun with each other.
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Resurrecting this great thread...

I think I could have spared a Lord to the Plains of Ra. (S)he could have then relayed quickly and reliably the scouts' reports so that the Warward could start their leisurely march from their centrally located non-flammable fort that I would have had built instead of Revelwood. After that the Lord and his/her Ranyhyn and escorts would join the Ramen in fighting guerrilla warfare against Fleshharrower's army and attempting to cut his supply lines. Even if the army is full of cannibals, if they eat each other they'll be a lot weaker as a result.

I also don't think High Lord Elena HAD to go searching for the Seventh Ward. She should have sent someone more suitable, such as Lord Amatin the frail lore nerd. (Callindrill could have stayed at Revelwood if it had been built despite my advice.) I think Amok wouldn't be against that. Thomas Covenant wouldn't have accompanied Amatin so she would have been on her own in attempting to solve the password. (I think she would have solved the rockslide simply by leaving her horse behind and walking on the upper edge.) Unfortunately, I think Amatin would have had a fair chance of solving the password. Elena herself mentioned the obscure passages in the known Wards that talked of "Power" and "Command" in connection to Melenkurion Skyweir. Amatin strikes me as the kind of person who might have been able to put that together. She did have unlimited guesses, after all. And if Amatin dared to drink EarthBlood (not certain, as she was saner than Elena and not blinded by hate) she would almost certainly have Commanded something more sensible than what Elena did if at all possible.

On another front, Covenant would have accompanied Elena to the war. As wars are hazardous, Covenant would have been in more of a pressure to use his wild magic. It's a risky propositiion, but perhaps he would have ended up doing something for the Warward, if he didn't try to blast Hile Troy instead, that is. Nevertheless, having Covenant directly involved in the war would have a significant effect on the odds.
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I knew I had forgotten a point...

I think even the people of the Land should have realized that the foodstores in Revelstone were insufficient and strived to get more. They were running out of food in early summer (or what should have been early summer)!

Let's see: The worst case scenario for the long term food situation of Revelstone is that the siege starts in autumn before the crops can be harvested and most of the population of the Center and North Plains flees to Revelstone successfully. As this did not happen (the siege started in "spring"), the Lords really don't appear very good at calculating food stores. At the very least, they should have enough food to feed all the potential inhabitants until the next harvest, preferably with some slack for unexpected events.

And then we have the problem of farming the plateau. Even discounting any unnatural winters, the Lords should have realized that Lord Foul might think of something to destroy the crops wholly or in part. This might include unnatural hailstorms, setting the plateau on fire somehow, and flying monsters. It appears that the griffins weren't strong enough to fly more than short distances, but Lord Foul might make up something new with the Illearth Stone.
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I agree that a Lord on the Plains of Ra, or anywhere with Ramen where the message could have been relayed faster to Revelstone would have been a wise idea.

And while I also think that Elena would have done better not seeking the 7th Ward, that's all with the benefit of hindsight. Just like there was no way to predict Elena's foolish choices, there is no way to predict Amatin's, let alone any way to be sure that she would have guessed the passwords. (And Revelwood was already built.)

As for the food, hmmm, "should have predicted" is easy to say. (When did the Lords learn that Foul held the Stone?)

Remember, the plan was never to fight Fouls army at Revelstone, (I don't remember the food shortages, but then, it's been a while), so why should they expect a protracted siege? They certainly didn't know that once Foul threw his army at the warward, there was another, just as big, that he had in reserve.

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I agree that Amatin could have caused something dreadful to happen, but I think she should have been sent anyway. She was the unsurpassed lore nerd and Elena was the mighty High Lord with the mighty Staff of Law. Amatin would have been better equipped to discover the usage of the Seventh Ward (for all they knew, the Seventh Ward would have been an obscure written text like the rest) and of all the Lords Elena was the one who would have been the most effective in battle. Then we have the Bloodguard only sending two of them to accompany Elena, so Elena should have been able to see that the danger shouldn't be anything Amatin wouldn't be able to handle. They could have even sent additional Bloodguard to make sure Amatin would be all right and still come out ahead in intelligent troop distribution.

As to the food issue, at one point in the siege Mhoram notes that they only have forty days of food if they wish to feed everyone (which they do). As this wasn't even close to the natural harvest time, someone should have figured out the insufficiency of the stores in advance and done something about it. Really, given Lord Foul's power and the deadline of the prophecy, an eventual siege of Revelstone was all but inevitable, as Revelstone was the single most defensible place controlled by the Lords. Doom's Retreat wasn't as good, but had the benefit of a somewhat more convenient location, so that the Lords wouldn't need to relinguish practically the entire Land to the Despiser first.

Hile Troy's biggest failing was that he forgot margins of error. Whoever planned the food stores of Revelstone suffered from the same problem.
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Aah, you're talking about the siege in TPTP, not the IllEarth War.

Certainly agree that, knowing that they were going to be facing a siege, provision should be made.

As for Amatin, well, she could hardly have done worse than Elena, even if she never did manage to open the door as it were, so I'll agree with you on that point. Elena would have been more effective in the actual battles.

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I have really enjoyed reading this thread. I think that due to the limitations in manpower and technology there is no realistic way Hile Troy could have defeated Fleshharrower's army in open battle. There were just too many of them and they were too powerful. Troy probably did the best he could given the circumstances. However, the problem of finding out when and where Fleshharrower's army was coming from in time to get the Warward positioned for battle could have been done much better.

Given that the Lords were able to grow Revelwood fairly soon after gaining the second Ward I see no reason why they couldn't grow a series of extremely tall (1000's of feet?) trees along the edge of Landsdrop with observation posts at the top. Each tree would probably be able to cover dozens of leagues particularly if they were able to develop some sort of telescope or binoculars for the observers. Then they could grow a series of smaller, but still very tall trees in a pattern up and down The Land staffed with additional observers. With this array in place using a simple semaphore system (basically colored fabric on sticks easily manufactured) the size, composition and direction of movement of Fleshharrowers army could be very quickly communicated to Revelstone or virtually anywhere in the Land. I don't know how many trees would be needed but I think a lot fewer than you think if they were tall enough and telescopes were available.

I also like an idea earlier in this thread about using the Ranyhyn as an early warning system. By incorporating my semaphore tree system the Lords at Revelstone would have the knowledge of Fleshharrowers army coming in a few hours at most after the first observation at Landsdrop. If one of the Lords were to call his Ranyhyn as soon as he gets the news, and assuming there was a semaphore tree outpost at Manhome, the message that the Ranyhyn had left the Plains of Ra would get to Revelstone days before Fleshharrowers army is sighted at Landsdrop. The message from Landsdrop would just give more information as to where exactly Fleshharrower is coming from. The Warward would have had days to prepare and start marching from Revelstone before Fleshharrower even got started!
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always nice to see this thread revived.

I certainly agree that the area in which the most improvement could have been made for the defence of the Land would have been in it's intelligence service, such as it was.

Knowing your enemy is half the battle.

I'm not sure that telescopes would have been possible though, in fact, I don't recall a mention of glass of any sort in the Chorns, although I could be wrong.

However, it's possible that a lord could amplify their eyesight with earthpower, the way Elena amplified her voice.

Of course, the other question is would they even have made the attempt if they had known in advance how large the enemy force was?

Outnumbered by 20-1, Troy, or anybody for that matter, may well have been daunted enough to almost paralyse their attempt.

Of course, we could say that only the knowledge that they'd left could have been passed on, but I'm sure that if they did devise a signalling system, they would be after the numbers too.

I've always wondered why Troy didn't make up some primitive black-powder explosives though. Don't need any technology for that.

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Warmark wrote: i would have sent envoys to the giants Long before the lords did. their combat experience would have been a great aid and they could be used as a great shock force.
This is actually untrue, they did send many messangers to Seareach of which most were wiped out or driven back, E.g. Hoerkin.
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In the Lords defense they were under the "Oath of Peace" and they weren't used to thinking about war. Their lifestyle would have made them totally inadequate for the coming trials.
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Buckarama wrote:In the Lords defense they were under the "Oath of Peace" and they weren't used to thinking about war. Their lifestyle would have made them totally inadequate for the coming trials.
So true.

My opinion: Could there have been a better strategy, why YES. However, I am more interested in limiting the solutions to using resources that existed, as they existed. If you don't, then it is a moot point, because you are not really dealing with the Land as it was, and there is then a universe of possibilities, and the question has little significance.

SRD's points aside, because of the Oath of Peace, because Elena was who she was, because of the timing of the Raver's possession of the triplets, because of Mhoram's visions, because Hile had the limitations he did, the choices and resources were limited as to what could be done, even with 40 years notice. Those consequences were just unavoidable and thus limits the choices available for strategy.

Answering this post makes me appreciate SRD even more, because of the way the Land and its people were, as well as TC and Hile, there really was no other significant outcome possible without changing a major element or character. This says a lot about the author.

The Oath of Peace was a <b> Way of Life</b> for the people of the land. they couldn't conceive of guerilla training, or any real preparation for an offensive at all! Perhaps it could be argued that the oath could be bent over time, people could be brought to a new oath that included offensive attacks, but even Mhoram didn't realize the damage the Oath did to the strength of the Lords until Revelstone itself was about to fall. There really was no one we know about who could have stepped up to this task.

As for Hile , he had no conception of how to make black powder, or any other weapon. he couldn't even describe a firearm, had never seen one! He didn't know "how" to see at all in the 'real' world, he was purely conceptual. His job in the think tank was his because he was not bogged down with details, and could conceptualize the big pictures of warfare without actually knowing any of the small details. I don't think Hile could have done anything other than what he did in the Land. If you think on it, SRD was brilliant in creating Hile. If it had been a normal person, then technology could be introduced, or any of a hundred different possibilities. But with Hile, he was exactly perfect for WarMark as it was, all theory and no practical knowledge whatsoever, and exactly equipped to fail as he did.

As far as the seventh Ward, how could they not go? There was no way anyone but Elena could go after the 7th ward, because of who she was. If she werent flawed in this way, she wouldnt be Elena. There was no other choice than to go for it. However, I think Elena could have found a better Command than bringing HLK back from the dead. She should have known that breaking such a Law would be monstrous, and Kevin was a failure in life, in my view.

I think the best chance is for the harachai to realize that they would better serve the lords by creating their own defense system early on, and perhaps making allies with the ramen, ranyhyn, and giants (none of whom took the oath) to secure the land. This would have to have happened right after LFB, before the loss of the Unhomed. Yes, Still, this would be a major change, but I think it is a weaker link and perhaps more attainable than changing the Oath, Elena, Hile, or introducing WMD to the Land. I could digress, but I won't.

Sorry to be long winded, these are my opinions, and if I offended anyone, it was certainly not my intention.
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i think you hit the nail on the head there, mate. everything happened the way it did because of the people involved. you can no more ask the Lords to prepare for a war they had no training or foreknowledge to fight than you can call on the sea to rise up and obliterate Foul's creche.

those events may, probably will, and already have(ahhh...the paradox of time travel :D ) lead to the destruction of Foul. it was neccessary that they get things wrong imo.
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iquestor wrote:The Oath of Peace was a <b> Way of Life</b> for the people of the land. they couldn't conceive of guerilla training, or any real preparation for an offensive at all!
It's bigger than the Oath, IMO. The people of the Land lived a life of service, service to the Land, service to their fellow men, service to beauty. Turning Land society into a war society is as much of a corruption as anything Foul could do. Growing trees in the service of war is an abomination. Defacing the Land with walls would be tantamount to sin. Its a matter of not losing what you are preserving when you try to preserve it. Time and again, they have chosen to let Foul destroy something over transforming it themselves and becoming what they choose not to be. The Warmark was their only concession, created to protect lives, not to lead offensive strikes. If they died defending the Land, they would fail, and leave the defense to others ... but they would not be the ones to blight the Land or diminish the character of its people.
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That being said, I still say that proper use of Ranyhyn would have alerted the Warward to Foul's army's course a week or so before it was even spotted. Tricky timeloose trotters, those Ranyhyn.
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iquestor wrote: My opinion: Could there have been a better strategy, why YES. However, I am more interested in limiting the solutions to using resources that existed, as they existed. If you don't, then it is a moot point, because you are not really dealing with the Land as it was, and there is then a universe of possibilities, and the question has little significance.
I certainly agree that we must limit ourselves to the resources that existed at that point, and indeed, I have tried to insist on doing so. I do not think it is unrealistic however to mention actions or plans that were possible with the resources that did exist, but were not utilised.

As a result though, the real question is what better strategy could have existed within those limits, and as I said earlier in the thread, I believe that possible improvements were very few.
iquestor wrote:The Oath of Peace was a <b> Way of Life</b> for the people of the land. they couldn't conceive of guerilla training, or any real preparation for an offensive at all! Perhaps it could be argued that the oath could be bent over time, people could be brought to a new oath that included offensive attacks, but even Mhoram didn't realize the damage the Oath did to the strength of the Lords until Revelstone itself was about to fall. There really was no one we know about who could have stepped up to this task.
And yet, despite the Oath of Peace, the Warward, a standing army, existed. As a result, while I agree that philosophical limitations applied, practical ones could be overcome if they had been addressed over the time of Troy's command.
iquestor wrote:As for Hile , he had no conception of how to make black powder, or any other weapon. he couldn't even describe a firearm, had never seen one! He didn't know "how" to see at all in the 'real' world, he was purely conceptual. His job in the think tank was his because he was not bogged down with details, and could conceptualize the big pictures of warfare without actually knowing any of the small details.
That's the thing...although I accept his limitations in giving instructions for anything sophisticated, I find it hard to believe that coarse black powder was beyond his abilities.

I wouldn't be surprised if a large number of people here could provide a primitive recipe for black powder. All it is, literally, is ground charcoal, sulphur and potassium nitrate. We know they had a certain level of mining and metalworking, because they had swords. Swords need to be forged, so there is your charcoal. The land obviously had many horses, and dung-heaps were the initial source of potassium nitrate, which naturally crystallises through the decomposition of urea and other nitrogenous materials.

I will accept though that sulphur may have been a bit difficult, but it can be found in even surface deposits, especially near volcanic regions.

Essentially, I don't think that a primitive hand-grenade should have been beyond Troy. However, I do accept that, since there weren't any, it falls outside the parameters of available resources, and shouldn't figure in a "What I would have done" scenario.
iquestor wrote:I don't think Hile could have done anything other than what he did in the Land. If you think on it, SRD was brilliant in creating Hile. If it had been a normal person, then technology could be introduced, or any of a hundred different possibilities. But with Hile, he was exactly perfect for WarMark as it was, all theory and no practical knowledge whatsoever, and exactly equipped to fail as he did.
I certainly agree that Troy couldn't have done other than as he did in terms of the story. My own conclusion in terms of his actions (in my very long post a few pages back) was that he in fact did remarkably well, considering his limitations. However, certain issues, like the early warning system, could easily have been dealt with without recourse to "despoiling" the Land.
iquestor wrote:As far as the seventh Ward, how could they not go? There was no way anyone but Elena could go after the 7th ward, because of who she was. If she werent flawed in this way, she wouldnt be Elena. There was no other choice than to go for it. However, I think Elena could have found a better Command than bringing HLK back from the dead. She should have known that breaking such a Law would be monstrous, and Kevin was a failure in life, in my view.
This, I think, deals more with the necessities of the narrative than of any practical defence of the Land, and despite reiterating that Elena would have been more effective in battle than galivanting about, I don't disagree with you.
iquestor wrote:I think the best chance is for the harachai to realize that they would better serve the lords by creating their own defense system early on, and perhaps making allies with the ramen, ranyhyn, and giants (none of whom took the oath) to secure the land. This would have to have happened right after LFB, before the loss of the Unhomed. Yes, Still, this would be a major change, but I think it is a weaker link and perhaps more attainable than changing the Oath, Elena, Hile, or introducing WMD to the Land. I could digress, but I won't.

Sorry to be long winded, these are my opinions, and if I offended anyone, it was certainly not my intention.
While I think that such an "alliance" would have been a good idea, (and it would have had to have been a more active one, because essentially, they were allied), again, it was not something that Troy could have achieved during his command, and therefore unfortunately a moot point in terms of the discussion.

As for being long-winded, a lot of us are. :lol: And there was nothing offensive about your post either. ;) I like this topic, and I'm glad to see it active again.

WayFriend, although I agree with you from an idealistic point of view, I wonder how far the Lords would actually have gone, given that the other option was to lose everything?

Of course, the Lords and people would probably rather lose honourably than win, but I doubt Troy shared their attitude. He loved the Land, and he would have, did, in fact give anything to have it victorious.

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Wayfriend wrote:That being said, I still say that proper use of Ranyhyn would have alerted the Warward to Foul's army's course a week or so before it was even spotted. Tricky timeloose trotters, those Ranyhyn.
I'm stil not sure this would work, the Ranyhyn roam the planes of Ra while waiting to be called dont they?

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