A poem I thought up

Post by **Reisheiruhime** » Sun May 25, 2003 3:28 am

(Yeah, I know, it probably sucks big time.)

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Running through the woods,
Hair unbound.
Running through the woods,
Trying not to make a sound.
Running through the woods,
Hear the bark of God's Hounds.
Running through the woods,
Fear abounds.

Hiding in the woods,
Try to hide the fear.
Hiding in the woods,
Hope the Hounds don't hear.
Dying in the woods,
God's wrath incurred.
Dead in the woods,
The Hounds heard.

Post by **Worm of Despite** » Sun May 25, 2003 3:30 am

Hell no! It's as good as my stuff, and it rhymes! And you're 12?!! Writing genius! I *NEVER* wrote anything at 12, so you're awesome--awesome!

Post by **Reisheiruhime** » Sun May 25, 2003 3:42 am

Wow! I take that as a true compliment. Thank you very much. Here's another. My cousin gave me the idea so I wrote it for her about a year ago.

Marrige
He may be a god,
But he's no angel.
One of Hell's own-
Lucifer's pride.
He cries when I laugh,
Laughs when I cry;
A strange pair we make,
My husband and I.

Post by **Worm of Despite** » Sun May 25, 2003 3:44 am

She get married? Hope it didn't turn out as bad as the marriage in that poem!

Post by **Reisheiruhime** » Sun May 25, 2003 3:55 am

She's happily married to a lawyer in Atlanta.

Post by **Vain** » Sun May 25, 2003 10:43 am

The first one was great....good tempo to it

Post by **Reisheiruhime** » Sun May 25, 2003 6:58 pm

Yes, I really did surprise myself by rhyming there.

But, if you like those poems, then should I post more?

Post by **Infelice** » Sun May 25, 2003 8:19 pm

More Turiya, more>

Post by **Reisheiruhime** » Sun May 25, 2003 8:24 pm

Ok.

That I shall do.

Kevin's Watch

Kevin's Watch

A poem I thought up

A poem I thought up