Kevin's Watch

(Yeah, I know, it probably sucks big time.)

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Running through the woods,
Hair unbound.
Running through the woods,
Trying not to make a sound.
Running through the woods,
Hear the bark of God's Hounds.
Running through the woods,
Fear abounds.

Hiding in the woods,
Try to hide the fear.
Hiding in the woods,
Hope the Hounds don't hear.
Dying in the woods,
God's wrath incurred.
Dead in the woods,
The Hounds heard.

Hell no! It's as good as my stuff, and it rhymes! And you're 12?!! Writing genius! I *NEVER* wrote anything at 12, so you're awesome--awesome!

Wow! I take that as a true compliment. Thank you very much. Here's another. My cousin gave me the idea so I wrote it for her about a year ago.

Marrige
He may be a god,
But he's no angel.
One of Hell's own-
Lucifer's pride.
He cries when I laugh,
Laughs when I cry;
A strange pair we make,
My husband and I.

She get married? Hope it didn't turn out as bad as the marriage in that poem!

She's happily married to a lawyer in Atlanta.

The first one was great....good tempo to it

Yes, I really did surprise myself by rhyming there. But, if you like those poems, then should I post more?

More Turiya, more>

Ok. That I shall do.