Derivation - Comments

[hierachy]

This is the thread for discussion of ' Derivation'.

This story is somewhat of an experiment insomuch as it will take a fairly unconventional format.

I will be adding to this story regularly, so if you enjoy it remember to check back for updates.

[CovenantJr]

So far so good. I'd like to read more. Accessible, direct...and I like Mortimer.