The fall

Post by **CovenantJr** » Mon Jan 10, 2005 8:40 pm

Announcement: This has been removed in my great purge of 31/8/05. I may send any or all of these to genre publications, and I don't want any issues because they're available here for free.

Post by **Avatar** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 5:15 am

Nice one Cj.

Reminds me a bit of the beginning of Rushdie's The Satanic Verses, although only vaguely, especially as it's been a long time since I read it.

As a short prose piece, I quite like it.

--Avatar

Post by **CovenantJr** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 5:54 pm

Thanks. I have a problem with heights, so I started with the word "falling" and it went from there.

Bizarrely, this has expanded far beyond its original remit and has proved to be a key piece in linking several previously unrelated narrative threads, including my anthology entry.

I appreciate the kind words

Post by **Loredoctor** » Sun Jan 16, 2005 2:14 am

WOW! That was very impressive! You really capture the emotion and situation very well!

Post by **ChoChiyo** » Sun Jan 16, 2005 2:24 am

For some reason, I thought of Satan being cast out of Heaven.

It gave me a couple of shudders and a whole series of goose bumps.

Nice work.

Post by **CovenantJr** » Sun Jan 16, 2005 7:09 pm

ChoChiyo wrote:For some reason, I thought of Satan being cast out of Heaven.

Again, thank you all for the compliments.

Kevin's Watch

Kevin's Watch

The fall

The fall