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Regular readers may have noticed I often write in the first person - I just seem to write better that way. Well this one is first person and present tense, written today.



Announcement: This has been removed in my great purge of 31/8/05. I may send any or all of these to genre publications, and I don't want any issues because they're available here for free.
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Announcement: This has been removed in my great purge of 31/8/05. I may send any or all of these to genre publications, and I don't want any issues because they're available here for free.
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:lol: Enjoyed the second installment a lot. Definite potential here.

Nice one Cj.

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Thanks, Avatar :shifty: You're making me nervous. I'm not used to anyone besides Loremaster reading this stuff :crazy: :screwy:
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Good stuff, Cov.


No need to be nervous, btw.
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Yeah, what he said. :)

By the way, just to make it worse, I read the second one three[/i] times.

Thought I'd missed "you" killing the captain, so re-read to find it, realised I hadn't, and so read it again just for the fun of "seeing" him die like that.

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:oops: Thanks guys :oops:
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Oh Cov, that was absolutely exquisite! I was melted into it from the first line. You have a wonderful style. I love it. more, please.
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You're very kind, thank you.
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