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I am not entirely happy (ie done) with this fantasy short story yet--technically it is a very short novelette at 8,000 words. I am currently working on another story, giving myself some space from this one before going back to perfect it before I send it out to different magazines.
I'd appreciate any feedback.

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Edit: fixed the broken link. You can actually read the story now :D
Was auch immer komm, dieses weiß ich für sicher:
Ich bin zurückgekauft.

Wenn Diamanten reichlich war, würden sie keinen Wert haben. Echter Wert kommt nich aus schönheit--er kommt aus seltenheit.
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Have downloaded it...will give it a read. :)

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