Atheists/agnostics only, I think. Heh.
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CovenantJr
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Atheists/agnostics only, I think. Heh.
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keep going CJ, i wanna read the next bit! 
you're more advanced than a cockroach,
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
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CovenantJr
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You're out of luck, I'm afraid. 
I have no plans to write any more on this.
The way I write is pretty unrefined. Since I don't intend to continue it, I don't think I'll bother. In fact, I don't know why I posted it here at all. 
I have no plans to write any more on this.Thanks, and you're probably right.Avatar wrote:
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The way I write is pretty unrefined. Since I don't intend to continue it, I don't think I'll bother. In fact, I don't know why I posted it here at all. just to see which ones of us would own up, i'd imagine! 
you're more advanced than a cockroach,
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
have you ever tried explaining yourself
to one of them?
~ alan bates, the mothman prophecies
i've had this with actors before, on the set,
where they get upset about the [size of my]
trailer, and i'm always like...take my trailer,
cause... i'm from Kentucky
and that's not what we brag about.
~ george clooney, inside the actor's studio
a straight edge for legends at
the fold - searching for our
lost cities of gold. burnt tar,
gravel pits. sixteen gears switch.
Haphazard Lucy strolls by.
~ dennis r wood ~
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CovenantJr
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Write first, and when it's all over, THEN rewrite.
As for me, I like your soliloquy. I'd almost like to see it as a short story, complete with interactions with other characters. But definitely don't give up on this--it's too good an idea to have languish about and then put it to an untimely death.
Keep writing, Cov, and keep sharing. People like me need to see others succeeding--it gives me hope that one day I can complete a story.
As for me, I like your soliloquy. I'd almost like to see it as a short story, complete with interactions with other characters. But definitely don't give up on this--it's too good an idea to have languish about and then put it to an untimely death.
Keep writing, Cov, and keep sharing. People like me need to see others succeeding--it gives me hope that one day I can complete a story.
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I hate my writing--prose-wise anyway. It always sounds awkward to my ears, and I get embarrassed and then scrap the entire thing. I don't even let my friends read my prose. So until I can write a beginning worth keeping, I won't even think about finishing something.CovenantJr wrote:Continue to work on that hope that you can finish a story.
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Hm, I completely forgot you said this. I should have replied "Please send me something of yours", but I think I was feeling the strain from being pressured to proof-read several things at once. So I'll say it now: Please send me something of yours. You don't need to be self-conscious about it.Wyldewode wrote:I hate my writing--prose-wise anyway. It always sounds awkward to my ears, and I get embarrassed and then scrap the entire thing. I don't even let my friends read my prose. So until I can write a beginning worth keeping, I won't even think about finishing something.CovenantJr wrote:Continue to work on that hope that you can finish a story.
If you like, I can give you my opinion (though it probably won't happen until I get home net access in a few weeks) or if you prefer I can keep my opinions to myself.