DLB, yeah, that's an interesting insight into the Haruchai. I like thinking of Stave from the perspective of the masters, and seeing how they view him in the same light as Doar, Sill, and Korik--yet he is viewed by us as a hero, not a failure. Surely this is significant. I also like the distinction between their striving for the sake of striving, contrasted with their emphasis on results. On the one hand, they are authentic when they accept their failings. On the other hand, they consider Stave inauthentic because he did accept the shortcomings of their mastery. Something has fundamentally changed. Perhaps a clue lies with the Humbled, and how they mirror Doar, Sill, and Korik.
I also thought this post was very significant:
You say "finicky": I say "subjective," ("Let's call the whole thing off"--if you'll forgive an obscure--not to mentioned strained--joke). But here's how it looks to me. I understand your point about the rhythm of "final". To my mind, however, "last" asserts that there will not be any more "chronicles," whereas "final" suggests that there may not be any more of ANYthing. In other words, "final" sounds more, well, *final* than "last" does.
As I say, subjective....
(10/03/2007)
So there WILL be something left after all this is over! That's nice to know.