Hybridisation to prove a point

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Hybridisation to prove a point

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CovenantJr wrote:...I'm not going to share his criticisms (or mine) at this juncture. I want to find out what yours are.
The number of views indicates people are reading this, but evidently no-one's willing to comment. I might move it to the writers' forum instead.
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cov jr. i have started reading. don't move as i will comment when i have more time to do it justice.
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Thanks Sgt. I've restored a couple of italicised bits that I just realised were lost in the transfer from MS Word.

I think I'm going to also post this in the Writers' Circle, so when you feel up to commenting, feel free to do it in whichever thread you prefer.
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I read it pretty much as soon as you posted it. Why didn't I reply? I didn't know what to say.

I liked it. That's all I really had to say and I found it awkward to say just that.
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You smell.
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Haha, and you love it :P
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