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Ashen hearts today,
daffodils in the garden
smile on Easter morn
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This isn't a haiku, but it's the closer I've ever been to one:

A few years later I found it
The thatched roof had fallen in
The furniture was dilapidated
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Corruption mars all
But Land's life shall prevail
You need not fail
The only difference between light and dark is the ability to tell the difference.
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Summer heat swelters
sun-shafts pierce all pasty flesh
painting light and pain.
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my first (ever) haiku

aliantha's taste
diamondraught, so true
vitrim for the soul
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Post by bossk »

This is not specifically about the Land (no sidewalks or lawnmowers as far as I know), but it is a haiku.

cut grass on sidewalk
light green lines of summer spent
stick on her bare feet
Misanthropes of the world, unite!
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:lol: Should pay more attention to this thread. Really like the last three, Boosk's, Jerelaks, and DW's. Good stuff folks.

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Post by iQuestor »

1. The Grieve

Mighty Rockbrothers,
You became that which you hate.
Coercri is your tomb.


2. Koriks fate

Hyrim unheeded,
Three attempt Corruption,
ancient service's ruin.
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WGW

The vow is broken
Revelstone is now besieged
But hope is alive
And I swear
I'll never do it again
Unless you kinda liked it...
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Grass

Amanibhavam
Madness, death, healing power
I ask for mercy
And I swear
I'll never do it again
Unless you kinda liked it...
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I trudge numbly down
Leprosy is not my life
I must pay my bills
And I swear
I'll never do it again
Unless you kinda liked it...
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Golden boy of clay
Dare to leap from the rooftop
and shatter your dreams
And I swear
I'll never do it again
Unless you kinda liked it...
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Hyrim turned and said,
"You have known Foamfollower;
I want you to come."
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The rape of Lena

He awoke alone
adrift on the Mithil shore.
He lent her his shame.
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Post by DukkhaWaynhim »

Caesure
Time wrenches open
untraveled paths branch out as
When and What collide.

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Post by Linna Heartbooger »

A few for Linden:


Trapped within herself
Crying to come up for air
Afraid to be seen.


The little girl died.
Once, then twice, in different deaths.
Can love yet have life?


Silent pressure builds.
Only need's extremity
Can bring her heart forth.


Child's cries and pleas spurned.
Suffocated with hatred.
Redemption of truth.
"People without hope not only don't write novels, but what is more to the point, they don't read them.
They don't take long looks at anything, because they lack the courage.
The way to despair is to refuse to have any kind of experience, and the novel, of course, is a way to have experience."
-Flannery O'Connor

"In spite of much that militates against quietness there are people who still read books. They are the people who keep me going."
-Elisabeth Elliot, Preface, "A Chance to Die: The Life and Legacy of Amy Carmichael"
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Under the Masters
The Land's Need goes Unheeded
White Gold, Save or Damn
Get that friggin' croyel offa me!
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All thoughts to her son
Linden threatens time and fate
No tear for the Land
Get that friggin' croyel offa me!
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Post by Skurj Scourge »

For Ak-Haru

Tattered robes, frail limbs
The highest calling of all?
To guard the One Tree

A Ship of Stone nears
Alas, the Worm, it awakes
White gold calls the stars

A blind man stands fast
To protect the world from death
In loss, victory
Get that friggin' croyel offa me!
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  • Son of Cail and lust
    Because of you I am made
    There will be havoc
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