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It’s easy to think
That the cool wind blows
Just for you
When you’re the only real person you know
That’s alive this time of night
It came ‘cause you wanted it
Needed it without knowing before
It had to
No other reason if not for you

When you’re enjoying the breeze
And it fades away
Your belief you brought it is so rooted
You must believe it left,
As much so as it came,
Just for you
Some hidden defect
Which you know of
But not exactly what
Made you unworthy

When you think of winds
Always after you believe
You can attract it and repel
Enjoy the breeze while it’s there
Because even though you’re good enough
To draw it near
You’re not enough
To make it stay
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Sylvanus wrote:Enjoy the breeze while it’s there
Because even though you’re good enough
To draw it near
You’re not enough
To make it stay
EXCELLENT!!
All lies and jest
Still a man hears what he wants to hear
And disregards the rest
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I agree! Most excellent!! :D Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks :oops:
as far as sharing... it's my pleasure. i got lots more, but i'll wait for some other people to put some up.
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I wish I had the courage...you don't know what it took for me to put one up at the Hangar, and there are so many more people here, I don't know if I ever could. :oops:
But I certainly appreciate YOUR courage in putting up yours. Then again, yours is a LOT better than mine! :wink:
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courage? heh, i think a willful ignorance is closer to the mark. as far as better... i doubt it. besides, poetry is entirely subjective. the only bad poem (unless you happen to be a Vogon) is the one nobody hears.

speaking of, as Foamfollower would say, "Joy is in the ears that hear."
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Well, I know that Lord Mhoram and Lord Danlo know how to copy something from one website to another. So if one of them tells me how, maybe I'll bring over one of my Hangar poems. In the meantime, they are at pub40.ezboard.com/bahirashangar which is a great website in and of itself. :D
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